Adultery Mis-Adventures of my life

[Zoz34]

Hi Guys, would like to receive some feedback here the story within story concept is it working not working? Its more of a fantasy building phase and obviously there are no real partners in action yet. If You guys think the story needs to take a different direction or probably the concept is not working?

The story is going nice, in fantasy building phase you can add some angst elements of Rehan, like he suggested her to little exhibitionist but also gets little jealous, but drawn into it .

If you need help with ideas I can suggest you