Thriller Naked Eyes

[Mortalbeast]

I really admire the dedication you’ve shown in this story—your attention to detail and the way you build suspense is impressive.
right from the start up to this point,,,the storyline is so engaging!
No intention to discourage u but...one part that felt a bit off, though, was the romantic and emotional drama angle with the mom and the thief... nothing else.
If she did it to protect her family, then fair enough.
Overall, story has amazing potential, and I’m loving every bit of it

First of all thanks dude for reading it in such detail. Honestly, comments like this do fulfil all the hard work.

Yes chnna's mom on one half was doing all this to protect her son. She didn't wanted that thief to go near her son's room that's why she kept him occupied. One detail which i gave but wasn't caught by many was, Chinna's mom didn't tell her real name to that thief. Her name is Jyoti not shanti. This was a reference to indicate that she is indeed doing all this to protect her son which that thief threatened to hurt.

Next, Yes, After a while she did fall for his Alpha tricks and lies. As she is naïve, which that thief did understood and used it to his advantage. From first thief wanted love and care from her to continue their relation further. So, he began worshipping her and showered her with love. He used many tricks on her which she never dreamed of and thus he became her Dream lover. Slowly that converted to her crush. Actually She is attracted to thief.
As mentioned in story, thief is most skilful in sex. He knows how to seduce a woman with all his dirty tricks. On one side he alienated her from husband by making him villain and showing as if he doesn't care about his wife and the thief is sole care taker of her. 
On other hand he brought her to a dreamland and made her Queen.
Vinay always treated her as slut in bed kind of in a aggressive way. But when she got told and treated like a Queen. She started to believe herself as Queen and the thief as King.
In last, tears were a emotion of her failing Queen dreamland as she now has to return to reality.

Thanks dude, Your comment made my day!