06-11-2024, 01:20 AM
(06-11-2024, 01:07 AM)krantikumar Wrote: Story line is good... Iif story includes erotic talks regarding sex.. and hot conversation between these 3 guys... Then story will be next level.. your narration is good
Thanks for the suggestion man.
I am trying to continue the story in a linear way for a few updates, later once the characters become comfortable among themselves can write conversations. But will try to write after the next update.