05-11-2024, 07:50 PM
(05-11-2024, 07:43 PM)cool.smart2 Wrote: Excellent bro…too much temptation and too much restraint. This time you have made the story more erotic with use of specific erotic words and secret encounters..
Will it be more better if you mention about if she got wet with desire or she played with her body thinking about Arjun.
If you think, in next updates pls make the encounters more naughty with both getting more physical like more intimate touching.
More naughty conversations will be more erotic to read bro.
Yes! will definitely do it. Planing to get them mastrubation on phone together but thinking to take slow and make them text for a while and turn into texting them mastrubation. If I did that it kinda look realistic but it will just drag the story. Will try to make it everything in one episode
Feel free to critique
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