04-11-2024, 10:48 PM
I like your writing style, you definitely have a knack of writing. The narration is so good, it feels like the story is coming alive.
The timing of Mr. Banerjee entrance was on point. Just when the story was getting stale with only the Harpreet and Aradhya, Mr Banerjee made the right entrance and even got rewarded more than Harpreet.
Somewhere I feel, Aradhya's appetite is definitely increased when Mr Banerjee made his presence. Aradhya's enjoying more with Mr. Banerjee may be simply because of the nature of two polarities of their characters. Here we have Aradhya who is a hot bombshell and then we have Mr Banerjee who is your 'portly' short old man. Maybe because of the contrast. Maybe because of Taboo nature
Maybe it's because of the way Mr. Banerjee "worships" her. In his eyes she's absolute goddess and Aradhya can feel it from his lustful eyes and hungry. She was more of willing participant, she was very much willing to take her blouse off and let him suck those melons. She was disappointed when he went away, maybe more disappointed than Harpreet going away. Very erotic!
I feel Mr. Banerjee maybe colluding with Harpreet to achieve their goals or maybe Mr. Banerjee took a guess and it worked. Maybe the neighbors never made any complaint and he just took a shot and it worked!
Aradhya started to feel more lust with the portly old man, maybe she secretly waiting for his return. She's also aware that Arijit not like him at all but he's okay with Harpreet. So she's not sure weather to report him about her encounters with Mr. Banerjee or not... Let's wait and see!
Now Mr. Banerjee will not miss a chance now that Harpreet has gone home. Can't wait to read the next episodes. Let's go author!
The timing of Mr. Banerjee entrance was on point. Just when the story was getting stale with only the Harpreet and Aradhya, Mr Banerjee made the right entrance and even got rewarded more than Harpreet.
Somewhere I feel, Aradhya's appetite is definitely increased when Mr Banerjee made his presence. Aradhya's enjoying more with Mr. Banerjee may be simply because of the nature of two polarities of their characters. Here we have Aradhya who is a hot bombshell and then we have Mr Banerjee who is your 'portly' short old man. Maybe because of the contrast. Maybe because of Taboo nature
Maybe it's because of the way Mr. Banerjee "worships" her. In his eyes she's absolute goddess and Aradhya can feel it from his lustful eyes and hungry. She was more of willing participant, she was very much willing to take her blouse off and let him suck those melons. She was disappointed when he went away, maybe more disappointed than Harpreet going away. Very erotic!
I feel Mr. Banerjee maybe colluding with Harpreet to achieve their goals or maybe Mr. Banerjee took a guess and it worked. Maybe the neighbors never made any complaint and he just took a shot and it worked!
Aradhya started to feel more lust with the portly old man, maybe she secretly waiting for his return. She's also aware that Arijit not like him at all but he's okay with Harpreet. So she's not sure weather to report him about her encounters with Mr. Banerjee or not... Let's wait and see!
Now Mr. Banerjee will not miss a chance now that Harpreet has gone home. Can't wait to read the next episodes. Let's go author!