03-11-2024, 04:44 PM
I really admire the dedication you’ve shown in this story—your attention to detail and the way you build suspense is impressive.
right from the start up to this point,,,the storyline is so engaging!
No intention to discourage u but...one part that felt a bit off, though, was the romantic and emotional drama angle with the mom and the thief... nothing else.
If she did it to protect her family, then fair enough.
Overall, story has amazing potential, and I’m loving every bit of it
right from the start up to this point,,,the storyline is so engaging!
No intention to discourage u but...one part that felt a bit off, though, was the romantic and emotional drama angle with the mom and the thief... nothing else.
If she did it to protect her family, then fair enough.
Overall, story has amazing potential, and I’m loving every bit of it
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