29-10-2024, 09:03 PM
(This post was last modified: 29-10-2024, 09:22 PM by xossissippi. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Comment 1/6
My Gratitue to Krish
Oh Maestro of literary erotica! I come forth to pay my humble homage to you, I bow down to your mind blowing imagination and immersive writing. I have been the biggest fan of your writing ever since I read the first part of your "Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well ", a very apt title in my opinion. Although never been vocal about it, lol but always appreciated your stories in my silent way and your stories have always been a prominent memory in my imagination whenever I thought anything erotic... Especially the scene from the part 1, where "Meera was grinding her luscious bums on old man Shekhar's groin in front of Krish in a great ambient mood party setting... then Kirsh re-imagining it in his own version and masturbating to it..." is still etched & burned into my memories, forever! For me that was the hottest and the most erotic scene ever imagined! Thank you for that, I'll be carrying that memory till the end of my life lol.
Just to jog through the memory lane for our readers, the most erotic lines from part 1:
I feel these verses right here were the beginning of a master blaster series. The immersion you created, at that time it felt as if the scenes were unfolding in front of my own eyes! I could close my eyes and be in that room in my imagination...even after re-reading it still does!! Epic erotic writing.
I want you guys to consider the specific lines below :
I want you guys to pay attention as I'll come back later on this...
The season 3 by far is the most erotic part in the series. You have outdone yourself in terms of the quality of writing and the progress you've. I have loved reading each and every chapter of it. Desai is of course one of the most formidable and a genius villain ever created for an erotica. His device plans and his motivation to achieve the goal what he chooses to set his eyes upon, his never giving up attitude is truly admirable and kept the readers engrossed and even in awe in some of genius tactics he has used. I is already evident in this thread that how he has become very famous and his character writing is loved by readers. In fact it can said, safely that Desai has become the central character of the show and Krish & Meera and all the others are mere pawns in his game. And there's nothing wrong with it. I have especially loved how well written this character, even as a reader you can never predict his next move, *"Is he a good guy or a bad guy?"* the question that always left us baffled. There are times where we ourselves become Krish and absolutely hate this guy, and many many many times we absolutely absolutely love the eroticism he brings in to the story, there are many layers to him and that's how you should write a character. Absolutely applause worthy!
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Comment 2 / 6
Original Ending, my thoughts
In my opinion which I've observed as why the part 3 clicks or why the part 3 is so erotic is mainly because the premise or the theme is purely mental. Meaning the theme of eroticism in part 3 is coming purely from the mental perspective, the detailing added to each of character's mindset and how they are thinking, Krish's mindset, Meera's mindset, Desai's and other's how they are thinking, how they are acting, the detailing added to their complex thought process in a very logical fashion is giving them their many layers of characterization and personalities, all of which working like a clockwork in building up the eroticism.
I am one of those fan who had absolutely loved the original ending. The story got so intense especially the climax part, where the story had build up to the point where Meera is ditching Krish for Desai, bro even my heartbeat got very intense. I am not going to lie that I absolutely loved the sex part, how Meera was a willing participant to get impregnated by Desai (at least at that point) was the most erotic sex scene ever narrated. And at the same time I was also very sad that Meera and Krish are indeed separating and they got outplayed by our beloved super villain and just when I thought Desai was finally successful in finally grabbing Meera by conquering her mentally, Ananya came in at the right time to save the day! Turns out "Desai is not so perfect after all!". The sequence of events occurring and the adrenaline build, and finally Krish and Meera back together everything was perfect. I came out of my gloomy phase was finally happy that Meera and Krish are together. The way all the loose ends were well connected with perfect writing, Everything is great! The world is great! The sun was shining and It was a perfect ending.
I know a lot of people did not receive the ending well but also a lot of people, enjoyed the original ending. And then you had announced that you're re-writing some parts of the story. Initially I thought why is it needed? The story is already very perfect. As you had said it yourself, the story is so complex to figure out lose ends and connect them all for re-write you can expend that energy into writing a new series and I absolutely agree. But on the other hand, I absolutely loved the idea! I know you're doing it for the fans and I respect that... and I as a fan was also intrigued as to what new things would be added?? I was also curious to see as to what will be the new content. I was very excited, maybe we got a golden chance to revisit some of the stuffs we had missed ( I'll come to this later)
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Comment 3 / 6
Alternate Ending, my thoughts
I am observing a trend where readers are expecting an alternate ending for the story. I know Desai had become so popular and the character is loved by everybody so much, that many people are rooting for Meera to end up with Desai and leave Krish. And after reading thus far, I can feel that's probably not how this is going to happen simply because it doesn't serve the purpose of the story... Probably one of the drawbacks of building up the villain to peak is that people have started perceiving villain to be hero and hero to be side character.
I'll give you my reasons as why that kind of ending may not serve it's purpose:
1. Desai is not the central character of the story. Yes he is pulling all the strings in such a perfect way that everything is happening as per his wants and desires and the rest of the characters feel like nothing but mere puppets in the hands of a master puppeteer ( even including Meera and Krish).
2. Desai is a dominant character, Krish is passive and cuckold character (not intending any offense here, simply indicating the role & purpose they serve) and our Meera is also a dominant character. For many of us we may not agree but Meera is a very dominant character, she chose the role of submissive only for the sake of Krish.
3. Meera shows her dominant character only for Krish. And Krish is submissive only for Meera. Because of which, their dynamics work, they are made for each other. And not only the equation in bed, Meera genuinely loves Krish, she would not survive without Krish and same goes with Krish, he doesn't any life without Meera.
4. But I know some might say but she's enjoying sex with other men. So this is what I feel - "Meera loves sex with others, only if Krish is enjoying it!" That's it! Using this one point alone you can reason out with many incidents that occurred in their lives. Yes, try it.
5. The moment Meera is separated from Krish, all the sex that she may get, she'll not drive any pleasure from it. That much is guaranteed! Her pleasure and all the seduction and humiliation she does has a purpose, only when Krish is aware.
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Comment 4 / 6
Desai's Goal (could be spoilers)
And now up until this point after reading through the new updates, I must say the story has reached to a whole new level! You have challenged yourself and I see Desai has played the trump card on bringing the couples together and earned himself in the good books of Meera. Meera is definitely impressed and will probably consider him as the savior of Krish and Meera's relationship.
Now I can see what the ultimate goal of Desai is.... and where the story is headed (apologize if the below lines are spoilers)
Desai knows he can't win her by force or by separating her from Krish (as we saw in original ending). The only way Desai can conquer Meera is by conquering her mind. He knows there's one last thing that Meera is denying Desai, the one thing that she has reserved only for Krish and nobody else and the one thing that distinguishes between Krish and Desai... if she does that, then he knows he got her.
That one thing is Meera spitting her "juice" into Desai's mouth.
Desai has understood that this is the only thing she's never done and has kept denying him as it is reserved only for her hubby Krish. She's not willing to share this 'special thing' to anyone other than Krish, not even Desai.
I think it might have frustrated Desai, but now, i think Desai has figured it out, if he can achieve that, then he knows he has conquered her mind and thereby Meera herself. She'll start playing to his whims and can claim her away, away from Krish. And being the mastermind as he is, he also figured how... He figured out that the only he can achieve that is by '*Becoming Krish*'. Yes, you see Meera is a dominant character and Krish is a submissive and therefore she "feeds" her spit to Krish's mouth. But Desai is a dominant character, for him to achieve that privilege, Desai has to become and submissive character... "Desai has to become a cuckold."
And the only way he become one is to offer Meera as his wife to another man, that is Piyush and enjoy Meera getting banged hard - as a voyeur as a cuckold... as Krish.
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Comment 5 / 6
Enter Piyush
After reading the Update 43, i must say it was the most erotic update (second most, I'll reveal the first most in the end) even when there's no explicit eroticism! Just a description of how Meera dressed elegantly showing her amazing curves and cleavage and the events naturally leading to Meera and Piyush sitting together like a couple, simply made us sit on edge of our chairs with high level of anticipation as something is about to happen between them.
I think the seed is sown into Meera's subconscious, from all the previous fiasco about Piyush wanting to bed Meera, that Meera could probably start imagining Piyush as a potential sex mate. Up until now, she thought of Piyush as nothing more than a friend but now after those incidents and her being aware that Piyush knows about her and Desai, some sparks could ignite if given right atmosphere ;)
The reason why this could work is because the seed that is sown by Desai, is the seed that has information that "It is actually Krish, that wants to see Meera having sex with Piyush" and once with that information, she'll do it, if that drives Krish's horny appetite. Desai's master stroke here again, brilliant.
But we have to ask ourselves... Why Meera sleeping with Piyush is more erotic than Meera sleeping with Desai???
It is simply because sex with Desai has become regular and mundane, I am sure he is bull in the bed but he has slowly taking up the role of Krish, her husband.
You can believe the above statement which is partially true, But I'll tell you the main and the single most "core" reason as to why sex with Piyush is more intriguing than Desai???
-- It is because **"Piyush is UNDESERVING" character for Meera. Think about it, Desai is tall, dark, has well built body, huge frame, he works out to keep in shape and Krish is tall, fair and handsome. If Meera being with any of them in public, then people can rightly assume, Ohh he (Desai / Krish) must be her husband. I don't think the same can be said about Piyush. Piyush is more on the fatter side as mentioned in the previous updates, he and his fat wife share in common. He joined gym but prefer to work out in the snacks bar lol. He probably be your very average looking common man, very fat body frame and must have huge potbelly.
Now seeing such a man with someone as angelic and sensual as Meera, many would *not* deem them as couple, "He probably must be her uncle or something" simply because even the nature feels, such kind of person is undeserving of a tall and hot female. And such kind of Pair is "Taboo" and that's what get our horny motors running!
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Comment 6 / 6
Most Erotic Update of the Series
Let's go back in time much earlier... Chapter 24
Wow wow and wow!! A huge applause from my end... This was the peak of eroticism in Part 3 in my opinion! If we imagining plausible chance of Piyush bedding Meera, feel so erotic and now imagine how erotic the encounter could've been if there's plausible chance with Narender uncle, a 70 year old man or any of his club similar character of 'grown up men'. Because he's even more 'undeserving' than Piyush, that raises the bar of eroticism.
I like how Krish already jumped into action wanting to know what kind of fantasies the old man is festering for Meera. And Meera equally excited. She initially told how "close" Narender uncle was sitting behind Meera on their daily trips to vegetable market. I am pretty sure Meera's voluptuous ass would fill the entire seat of the scooty with leaving very less room for Narender uncle to sit on. I am sure by "close" she meant her bubble butt was latched on to by Uncle's groin with constant pressure. I am sure when Uncle proceeded to hold her wide love handles in excuse as support, that sight must have sent him almost to a heart attack, probably the most sensual scene he ever witnessed since his birth and was lucky enough to be there in that spot with an "Amazonian Goddess". When he realized the beautiful woman didn't mind his touch on her hip, (why would she? it just a harmless holding, anybody would do that if they were a pillion rider behind) he starts his next move by praising her beauty, making her laugh, using that opportunity to touch her belly, feel her belly. Meera would have felt shocked, amazed and also in awe, that her beauty could jangle the circuitry of even a 70 year old man.
When the uncle was steering the conversion towards sexual innuendos and seeing Meera's equally intriguing responses, I am sure the old man's cock must've twitched and started poking into her latched massive buttocks. Meera must've felt it and was probably more intrigued. The old man must've held her love handle and pushed it towards his groin whenever they encountered a hump or a pothole on the road. A pretty good excuse to use that opportunity.
I really loved how both Krish and Meera turned on with Narender uncle's bold conversation. I really wanted to see Meera asking "Are you sure at this age, you and your group can keep up with working out with me?... hmm??" or "Is the store room big enough for us to work out??" "Are you taking those grains yourself uncle?"
Krish I feel it was a **missed opportunity** that we didn't get to explore with apartment oldies.
Now I have a request to make, if you could bring back "Narender uncle and the grown up men club" or any other similar character - old and lecherous, from the apartment complex. I think that would be a Remarkable approach towards the story. Only you could bring that erotic flavour Krish, with your immersive and imaginative writing.
I know there had been a few backlashes on her small encounter with Narender, mentioning that "How can Meera allow some random Narender uncle to touch her" and you also provided explanation. I think Narender uncle is not some random guy who suddenly appeared out of nowhere and started molesting her and Meera allowing it without any inhibition, without any decency. If Narender uncle is living in the top floor, then obviously there will be a minor acquaintance with Krish and Meera. Since they are living in apartment complex, they keep bumping into each other every now and then when they go for walk or etc. and also she could've heard rumors about some "club of lecherous old men". It's not about she allowing it, it's about how intrigued and surprised she was to find out how an old man "chose her and worshiped her" as the most beautiful woman in the apartment complex. It was Meera's body the main reason to ignite fire in an old man. She obviously felt the devotion of such a lowly old man and was in absolute awe... And moreover the writing was so good, that it can be brushed off as harmless touches as most of deliberate touches he performed were based on certain situations like when both were absolutely laughing, you don't mind when other person touches you or pinches you. That happens in a flow. It was not like the other person grabbed her boobs all of sudden and started pressing and went laughing 'hahaha' like a maniac, for her to get offended. lol
Anyways, I feel like this character (or any other similar) is worth revisiting every bit. You could please take your time Krish as to how you want to fit the new character in a meaningful and your signature erotic way
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I apologize I am so late to the party, but it's better late than never! Hopefully looking forward to see another interesting character. Hope I didn't make it more challenging, but that is a good thing. The story is evolving into multi-dimensional. Think of it this way as the new character could solve a problem that you're stuck with in terms of story or if Krish and Meera are stuck, the new character could be a savior and be in the main part of story. I'll leave it up to you, Maestro!
Ohh Mastermind!, I am sure this is something only you could do.
If you need more time, please do take it, no pressure.
All the very best!
My Gratitue to Krish
Oh Maestro of literary erotica! I come forth to pay my humble homage to you, I bow down to your mind blowing imagination and immersive writing. I have been the biggest fan of your writing ever since I read the first part of your "Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well ", a very apt title in my opinion. Although never been vocal about it, lol but always appreciated your stories in my silent way and your stories have always been a prominent memory in my imagination whenever I thought anything erotic... Especially the scene from the part 1, where "Meera was grinding her luscious bums on old man Shekhar's groin in front of Krish in a great ambient mood party setting... then Kirsh re-imagining it in his own version and masturbating to it..." is still etched & burned into my memories, forever! For me that was the hottest and the most erotic scene ever imagined! Thank you for that, I'll be carrying that memory till the end of my life lol.
Just to jog through the memory lane for our readers, the most erotic lines from part 1:
krish_999 Wrote:Erotic excerpt from Part 1, Chapter 7
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At that time there was a power cut. The lights went off, and battery powered lights, along with the decorative lights in the showcase lit up. It was just a few moments, and the power was back. Mr. Shekhar suggested that we've got some nice lights that can turn the living room to the right ambience of a pub. Meera said really? and she switched off the main lights and switched on all the decorative lights.
Mr. Shekhar was correct. We had the right kind of lights. Red lights from the sides, it was glowing like I had never noticed. Meera went a step further, as she switched on the stereo too.
"How's now?"
She asked him.
"I told you!"
He poured another round of drinks.
Meera asked me to shake legs with her.
"No!"
I quickly took my glass and began sipping it.
I suggested she can dance with Mr. Shekhar. He's better dancer.
He quickly got up and walked to her. It seemed he too wanted to dance. She removed her jacket and threw it to me and turned her complete attention to her man. He put his hands around her hip, and her hands on his chest. The dance was more intimate than what they had in the pub. I poured another drink before they finished that song.
I sensed my dick getting harder again yet I was completely relaxed. I saw Meera turning her back to him and still moving her hip in tune to the slow track. His hands were around her belly and as he stood that closer, I saw his hip rubbing on her butt. I was sure that he's as hard as me and it was visible that she had no problem with him rubbing it onto her.
I wanted to take out my dick and shake it hard. Though I had come to know that my wife was fucked my two men, or may be three men, it was the first time when I saw her sexually active with another man. And this sight, not only made me not angry but also made me enjoy a new feeling.
He said something in her ear. His lips were so close to her, and it looked like he's kissing her.
She looked at me and smiled.
"Are you enjoying our dance honey?"
"Mmm.. Yeah... Yeah!"
I stammered.
His hands now had made a firm grip around her belly. They were facing towards me.
He looked at me.
"What are you seeing, Krish? An old man with a young lady?"
Before I could reply, she turned her face to him and smiled. I doubted her lips touched his face.
No, not at all, Shekhar. I'm seeing a man with a girl."
"And what do you think of my girl?"
Meera kept grinning.
"She's very beautiful."
"That's all?"
"Mmm.. No, she's... Hot. Totally sexy."
Meera nodded her head and touched his face with her left hand without turning back.
"You like her?"
"Yes.. Yes I like her."
"You want to make love to her tonight?"
This time she turned her face to him and pinched his cheek. She said something that I couldn't grasp. I was awestruck with his question.
"Yes.. I want to."
"Okay. But only for one night, after that you'll return her to me. Promise me...."
"I promise... Only for tonight."
"And after that?"
"After that she's yours!"
She laughed high and pinched him hard.
He made a sound "ouch!"
Then he pushed her to me and she fell on my lap.
"Come on, don't waist time. It's already midnight!"
He said grabbing his glass and sat on the couch next to us.
"Are you going to make love to me? When he's watching?"
Meera asked me.
"I said yes, if he has no problem."
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"No. Now you shake yourself."
I lay without moving, without talking.
After a while she asked me to do it. I said, "It's okay. I'll sleep."
I suddenly felt her hand on my dick. I was still hard.
"Come on. Shake it, Krish."
This time her voice was much smooth.
"You watched me masturbate. Now you let me watch. Come on, it's okay."
She moved her hand up and down twice and left.
I gave in. I took it in hand and slowly started. Initially I felt like I'm spent already. But I had to do it. I closed my eyes, even though it was dark already. I wanted to see with my inner sight. There I saw Meera dancing with Shekhar. I saw her grinding her ass to his groin. I saw him caressing her belly and then her boobs. I then saw him moving his hip in sync to her movements as if he's pounding her from backside. I had gone too far. My hand peaked and I shot my load into the bed sheet.
"That was too quick, again."
I heard Meera giggling in the dark.
She then turned to me and hugged me tight.
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I feel these verses right here were the beginning of a master blaster series. The immersion you created, at that time it felt as if the scenes were unfolding in front of my own eyes! I could close my eyes and be in that room in my imagination...even after re-reading it still does!! Epic erotic writing.
I want you guys to consider the specific lines below :
krish_999 Wrote:excerpt from Part 1, Chapter 7
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"You want my juice, baby?"
She asked. I said yes. Have I ever told her no?
She kissed me first. And then asked me to open my mouth. I followed what is told.
She held my face with her palm and spat into my mouth. It was a bit forceful and it directly hit the back of my mouth.
I swallowed it quickly.
"Tasty?"
She asked and I said yes.
She touched my face and I opened my mouth again.
Again she spat.
"Drink it baby."
Again.
"Drink it Krish. It's my juice."
Again.
"Say you love my spit. And swallow it."
I did both.
Again.
Again and again. Until she felt enough for tonight.
We slept hugging tight.
I want you guys to pay attention as I'll come back later on this...
The season 3 by far is the most erotic part in the series. You have outdone yourself in terms of the quality of writing and the progress you've. I have loved reading each and every chapter of it. Desai is of course one of the most formidable and a genius villain ever created for an erotica. His device plans and his motivation to achieve the goal what he chooses to set his eyes upon, his never giving up attitude is truly admirable and kept the readers engrossed and even in awe in some of genius tactics he has used. I is already evident in this thread that how he has become very famous and his character writing is loved by readers. In fact it can said, safely that Desai has become the central character of the show and Krish & Meera and all the others are mere pawns in his game. And there's nothing wrong with it. I have especially loved how well written this character, even as a reader you can never predict his next move, *"Is he a good guy or a bad guy?"* the question that always left us baffled. There are times where we ourselves become Krish and absolutely hate this guy, and many many many times we absolutely absolutely love the eroticism he brings in to the story, there are many layers to him and that's how you should write a character. Absolutely applause worthy!
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Comment 2 / 6
Original Ending, my thoughts
In my opinion which I've observed as why the part 3 clicks or why the part 3 is so erotic is mainly because the premise or the theme is purely mental. Meaning the theme of eroticism in part 3 is coming purely from the mental perspective, the detailing added to each of character's mindset and how they are thinking, Krish's mindset, Meera's mindset, Desai's and other's how they are thinking, how they are acting, the detailing added to their complex thought process in a very logical fashion is giving them their many layers of characterization and personalities, all of which working like a clockwork in building up the eroticism.
I am one of those fan who had absolutely loved the original ending. The story got so intense especially the climax part, where the story had build up to the point where Meera is ditching Krish for Desai, bro even my heartbeat got very intense. I am not going to lie that I absolutely loved the sex part, how Meera was a willing participant to get impregnated by Desai (at least at that point) was the most erotic sex scene ever narrated. And at the same time I was also very sad that Meera and Krish are indeed separating and they got outplayed by our beloved super villain and just when I thought Desai was finally successful in finally grabbing Meera by conquering her mentally, Ananya came in at the right time to save the day! Turns out "Desai is not so perfect after all!". The sequence of events occurring and the adrenaline build, and finally Krish and Meera back together everything was perfect. I came out of my gloomy phase was finally happy that Meera and Krish are together. The way all the loose ends were well connected with perfect writing, Everything is great! The world is great! The sun was shining and It was a perfect ending.
I know a lot of people did not receive the ending well but also a lot of people, enjoyed the original ending. And then you had announced that you're re-writing some parts of the story. Initially I thought why is it needed? The story is already very perfect. As you had said it yourself, the story is so complex to figure out lose ends and connect them all for re-write you can expend that energy into writing a new series and I absolutely agree. But on the other hand, I absolutely loved the idea! I know you're doing it for the fans and I respect that... and I as a fan was also intrigued as to what new things would be added?? I was also curious to see as to what will be the new content. I was very excited, maybe we got a golden chance to revisit some of the stuffs we had missed ( I'll come to this later)
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Comment 3 / 6
Alternate Ending, my thoughts
I am observing a trend where readers are expecting an alternate ending for the story. I know Desai had become so popular and the character is loved by everybody so much, that many people are rooting for Meera to end up with Desai and leave Krish. And after reading thus far, I can feel that's probably not how this is going to happen simply because it doesn't serve the purpose of the story... Probably one of the drawbacks of building up the villain to peak is that people have started perceiving villain to be hero and hero to be side character.
I'll give you my reasons as why that kind of ending may not serve it's purpose:
1. Desai is not the central character of the story. Yes he is pulling all the strings in such a perfect way that everything is happening as per his wants and desires and the rest of the characters feel like nothing but mere puppets in the hands of a master puppeteer ( even including Meera and Krish).
2. Desai is a dominant character, Krish is passive and cuckold character (not intending any offense here, simply indicating the role & purpose they serve) and our Meera is also a dominant character. For many of us we may not agree but Meera is a very dominant character, she chose the role of submissive only for the sake of Krish.
3. Meera shows her dominant character only for Krish. And Krish is submissive only for Meera. Because of which, their dynamics work, they are made for each other. And not only the equation in bed, Meera genuinely loves Krish, she would not survive without Krish and same goes with Krish, he doesn't any life without Meera.
4. But I know some might say but she's enjoying sex with other men. So this is what I feel - "Meera loves sex with others, only if Krish is enjoying it!" That's it! Using this one point alone you can reason out with many incidents that occurred in their lives. Yes, try it.
5. The moment Meera is separated from Krish, all the sex that she may get, she'll not drive any pleasure from it. That much is guaranteed! Her pleasure and all the seduction and humiliation she does has a purpose, only when Krish is aware.
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Comment 4 / 6
Desai's Goal (could be spoilers)
And now up until this point after reading through the new updates, I must say the story has reached to a whole new level! You have challenged yourself and I see Desai has played the trump card on bringing the couples together and earned himself in the good books of Meera. Meera is definitely impressed and will probably consider him as the savior of Krish and Meera's relationship.
Now I can see what the ultimate goal of Desai is.... and where the story is headed (apologize if the below lines are spoilers)
Desai knows he can't win her by force or by separating her from Krish (as we saw in original ending). The only way Desai can conquer Meera is by conquering her mind. He knows there's one last thing that Meera is denying Desai, the one thing that she has reserved only for Krish and nobody else and the one thing that distinguishes between Krish and Desai... if she does that, then he knows he got her.
That one thing is Meera spitting her "juice" into Desai's mouth.
Desai has understood that this is the only thing she's never done and has kept denying him as it is reserved only for her hubby Krish. She's not willing to share this 'special thing' to anyone other than Krish, not even Desai.
I think it might have frustrated Desai, but now, i think Desai has figured it out, if he can achieve that, then he knows he has conquered her mind and thereby Meera herself. She'll start playing to his whims and can claim her away, away from Krish. And being the mastermind as he is, he also figured how... He figured out that the only he can achieve that is by '*Becoming Krish*'. Yes, you see Meera is a dominant character and Krish is a submissive and therefore she "feeds" her spit to Krish's mouth. But Desai is a dominant character, for him to achieve that privilege, Desai has to become and submissive character... "Desai has to become a cuckold."
And the only way he become one is to offer Meera as his wife to another man, that is Piyush and enjoy Meera getting banged hard - as a voyeur as a cuckold... as Krish.
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Comment 5 / 6
Enter Piyush
After reading the Update 43, i must say it was the most erotic update (second most, I'll reveal the first most in the end) even when there's no explicit eroticism! Just a description of how Meera dressed elegantly showing her amazing curves and cleavage and the events naturally leading to Meera and Piyush sitting together like a couple, simply made us sit on edge of our chairs with high level of anticipation as something is about to happen between them.
I think the seed is sown into Meera's subconscious, from all the previous fiasco about Piyush wanting to bed Meera, that Meera could probably start imagining Piyush as a potential sex mate. Up until now, she thought of Piyush as nothing more than a friend but now after those incidents and her being aware that Piyush knows about her and Desai, some sparks could ignite if given right atmosphere ;)
The reason why this could work is because the seed that is sown by Desai, is the seed that has information that "It is actually Krish, that wants to see Meera having sex with Piyush" and once with that information, she'll do it, if that drives Krish's horny appetite. Desai's master stroke here again, brilliant.
But we have to ask ourselves... Why Meera sleeping with Piyush is more erotic than Meera sleeping with Desai???
It is simply because sex with Desai has become regular and mundane, I am sure he is bull in the bed but he has slowly taking up the role of Krish, her husband.
You can believe the above statement which is partially true, But I'll tell you the main and the single most "core" reason as to why sex with Piyush is more intriguing than Desai???
-- It is because **"Piyush is UNDESERVING" character for Meera. Think about it, Desai is tall, dark, has well built body, huge frame, he works out to keep in shape and Krish is tall, fair and handsome. If Meera being with any of them in public, then people can rightly assume, Ohh he (Desai / Krish) must be her husband. I don't think the same can be said about Piyush. Piyush is more on the fatter side as mentioned in the previous updates, he and his fat wife share in common. He joined gym but prefer to work out in the snacks bar lol. He probably be your very average looking common man, very fat body frame and must have huge potbelly.
Now seeing such a man with someone as angelic and sensual as Meera, many would *not* deem them as couple, "He probably must be her uncle or something" simply because even the nature feels, such kind of person is undeserving of a tall and hot female. And such kind of Pair is "Taboo" and that's what get our horny motors running!
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Comment 6 / 6
Most Erotic Update of the Series
Let's go back in time much earlier... Chapter 24
krish_999 Wrote:Most erotic excerpt from Part 3, Chapter 24
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"Most of your neighbours are fond of me. Are you not aware?"
I gave her a look. "Most of them?"
Meera nodded and told me about Narender uncle who had surprised her with a piece of his mind a couple of weeks ago. Narender uncle and his family lived on one of the top floors of our apartment complex.
"I had given Narender uncle a lift on my scooty to the market. He sat behind me, very close to me, with his hands at my sides. He praised me, saying I was the most beautiful woman in our building and all other women are envious. Many are scared that their husbands and sons would be attracted to me. I asked him how did he know about others' opinions. He said he knows a lot of things when it comes to women. He also said the men do talk about me especially about the way I return home after my evening exercise. He wasn't ready to tell me what they talk, saying he was scared that I might drop him from my scooty. I assured him I wouldn't and I told him I was also curious to know about what other men talk about me. He said the men enjoy my sweaty look after my exercise. They often make cheeky remarks about us, especially because they don't see you sweating out there in the park. They think that's because you have the better option to work out with me in bed. And the day they see me my top is wet with sweat spots, they joke about having me work out with them in the storeroom near our parking lot. One day you know they had a small tossing game- several small stones throwing inside a circle - to find out who's going to go inside the store with me, and to see who's lucky among them."
"Who was the winner?"
"Uncle said it was Sidhartha. They made him buy onion pakoda for others to celebrate his winning."
"I asked uncle what kind of workout they were planning to do with me. He laughed and pinched my belly. He said I was very funny."
Even though she was casually mentioning how innocently Narender uncle touched her belly, I had a tough time believing that he would have held the same level of innocence. I remembered how his name had been mentioned by Pawan earlier.
"If I had told any other man in this building - let it be Narender uncle staying on the top floor, he's past seventy - to have sex with my wife, he would have jumped into the opportunity." Pawan had opined.
I wondered what would the uncle say if he heard the opinion his neighbour had about him.
Meera went on, "Narender uncle told me there's nothing to be panic about it because they all are family men. They were just joking about such stuff. Except that he felt one boy - who was of course not part of this grown-up men's group - seemed to be a bit different and to be cautious. It's about Harish. In uncle's opinion, he's a bit dangerous and creepy."
"Harish looks so to anyone," I remarked. "Because of his muscular appearance and difference from his overly social brother."
"I then asked uncle about you," Meera said with a smile and I was instantly curious. "He said you are wonderful but looks always busy with work. He advised me to feed you well."
I looked at her wondering what she meant. Meera smiled again. "I had your same doubt; I asked him what he meant by feeding you. He meant feeding you those things that give you energy - he patted on my belly and quipped 'you know what I mean'. He suggested oats and chickpeas, saying horses are fed with such grains to make them run faster and longer! I said he's unbelievably perverted to suggest such things to a married woman who's younger enough to be his daughter."
"Did he become ashamed?" I asked.
"No, he said he had warned me about it. I told him - yeah, that's the only reason for I'm not dropping you from the scooty."
"The next time when you get a chance you must ask him about his impression on you." I suggested.
Meera laughed, "You are more perverted than him. You want to know if the old man is nurturing any secret fantasies about me, don't you?"
"If he's nurturing any fantasies about you, I have the right to know. Ask him if he's having those grains."
"You are having a nice time with the stories of other perverts. But the biggest one is sitting with me." She pinched my cheek.
I asked her if she's planning to include those grains in my meals. Meera's eyes shone.
"I'll first check out how longer and faster you can run." She leaned forward and kissed me. "How about doing a trial right now, darling?"
She grabbed the waist with her left hand and inserted her right hand inside my pants. I gasped as I felt her fingers wrapping around my throbbing dick.
"Mmm... you are up but need a little more growth," Meera whispered and bent down to my lap. I felt the warmth of her mouth covering the round head of my dick. I adjusted myself on the sofa and welcomed the unexpected pleasure event as Meera kept going down until her lips touched her lips which were firm around my base. She sucked me to make me hard and strong and then got up to kneel on the couch upon my suggestive gesture. I got inside from behind her, and Meera leaned over the backrest of the couch as I pushed inside her. It felt good and I went faster and faster until I came inside her, panting heavily.
"Too excited... Again!" I blurted out my excuse.
"Mmm... Maybe I'll have to consider feeding you those grains," Meera joked.
I felt embarrassed as I felt she was indirectly telling me that I wasn't matching her needs.
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Wow wow and wow!! A huge applause from my end... This was the peak of eroticism in Part 3 in my opinion! If we imagining plausible chance of Piyush bedding Meera, feel so erotic and now imagine how erotic the encounter could've been if there's plausible chance with Narender uncle, a 70 year old man or any of his club similar character of 'grown up men'. Because he's even more 'undeserving' than Piyush, that raises the bar of eroticism.
I like how Krish already jumped into action wanting to know what kind of fantasies the old man is festering for Meera. And Meera equally excited. She initially told how "close" Narender uncle was sitting behind Meera on their daily trips to vegetable market. I am pretty sure Meera's voluptuous ass would fill the entire seat of the scooty with leaving very less room for Narender uncle to sit on. I am sure by "close" she meant her bubble butt was latched on to by Uncle's groin with constant pressure. I am sure when Uncle proceeded to hold her wide love handles in excuse as support, that sight must have sent him almost to a heart attack, probably the most sensual scene he ever witnessed since his birth and was lucky enough to be there in that spot with an "Amazonian Goddess". When he realized the beautiful woman didn't mind his touch on her hip, (why would she? it just a harmless holding, anybody would do that if they were a pillion rider behind) he starts his next move by praising her beauty, making her laugh, using that opportunity to touch her belly, feel her belly. Meera would have felt shocked, amazed and also in awe, that her beauty could jangle the circuitry of even a 70 year old man.
When the uncle was steering the conversion towards sexual innuendos and seeing Meera's equally intriguing responses, I am sure the old man's cock must've twitched and started poking into her latched massive buttocks. Meera must've felt it and was probably more intrigued. The old man must've held her love handle and pushed it towards his groin whenever they encountered a hump or a pothole on the road. A pretty good excuse to use that opportunity.
I really loved how both Krish and Meera turned on with Narender uncle's bold conversation. I really wanted to see Meera asking "Are you sure at this age, you and your group can keep up with working out with me?... hmm??" or "Is the store room big enough for us to work out??" "Are you taking those grains yourself uncle?"
Krish I feel it was a **missed opportunity** that we didn't get to explore with apartment oldies.
Now I have a request to make, if you could bring back "Narender uncle and the grown up men club" or any other similar character - old and lecherous, from the apartment complex. I think that would be a Remarkable approach towards the story. Only you could bring that erotic flavour Krish, with your immersive and imaginative writing.
I know there had been a few backlashes on her small encounter with Narender, mentioning that "How can Meera allow some random Narender uncle to touch her" and you also provided explanation. I think Narender uncle is not some random guy who suddenly appeared out of nowhere and started molesting her and Meera allowing it without any inhibition, without any decency. If Narender uncle is living in the top floor, then obviously there will be a minor acquaintance with Krish and Meera. Since they are living in apartment complex, they keep bumping into each other every now and then when they go for walk or etc. and also she could've heard rumors about some "club of lecherous old men". It's not about she allowing it, it's about how intrigued and surprised she was to find out how an old man "chose her and worshiped her" as the most beautiful woman in the apartment complex. It was Meera's body the main reason to ignite fire in an old man. She obviously felt the devotion of such a lowly old man and was in absolute awe... And moreover the writing was so good, that it can be brushed off as harmless touches as most of deliberate touches he performed were based on certain situations like when both were absolutely laughing, you don't mind when other person touches you or pinches you. That happens in a flow. It was not like the other person grabbed her boobs all of sudden and started pressing and went laughing 'hahaha' like a maniac, for her to get offended. lol
Anyways, I feel like this character (or any other similar) is worth revisiting every bit. You could please take your time Krish as to how you want to fit the new character in a meaningful and your signature erotic way
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I apologize I am so late to the party, but it's better late than never! Hopefully looking forward to see another interesting character. Hope I didn't make it more challenging, but that is a good thing. The story is evolving into multi-dimensional. Think of it this way as the new character could solve a problem that you're stuck with in terms of story or if Krish and Meera are stuck, the new character could be a savior and be in the main part of story. I'll leave it up to you, Maestro!
Ohh Mastermind!, I am sure this is something only you could do.
If you need more time, please do take it, no pressure.
All the very best!
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