A wedding ceremony in village

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Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA	15.53%	93	15.53%
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION	18.53%	111	18.53%
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED	34.06%	204	34.06%
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY	10.85%	65	10.85%
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE	6.01%	36	6.01%
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE	5.68%	34	5.68%
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION	9.35%	56	9.35%
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A wedding ceremony in village

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27-10-2024, 11:59 AM (This post was last modified: 27-10-2024, 12:36 PM by Logan555. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)

(19-09-2024, 11:09 PM)Shushant777 Wrote: Read my real story padson ka attitude toda. Reslut nahi likha lakin sex kuch real aur kuch imagine krke reader ko satisfied kiya. Iskr bad post krna band kr diya kyoki me bz tha isliye ye nahi chata ki reader is story ka intizar kre ok ji

(19-09-2024, 11:00 PM)Shushant777 Wrote: Paisa yha kisi bhi writer ko nahi milta Zaha tak mati soch ha lakin Agar koi writer itna bz ha to yaha per story kyo update kr raha ha .. Mera,Matlab sab reader ko pata chal gaya hoga. Me is khani se starting se Juda hua hu lakin ye writer ne abb tak jo main heroni ha usko koi bhi moka choice wala nahi diya vad depend on lakhan Agar uska pani bhi nikal raha ha to tab bhi Lakhan ke uper hi depend ha ki chodna ha ya nahi. It's means ye sab lakhan ki mili jhuli bhagat ha ki bati ki itni sahli ha jis per ak per lakhan ka dil aa gaya. Sab chud gayi lakin vineta hi nahi. Ab reader ye bato jiska pani chut se nikal raha ha wo to kute se bhi chodgi. Jabki lakhan ne to apni Umar se Kam pahlwan ko akhde me harya ha. Lakin Logan bhai aapki writing lajwab ha isme koi shak nahi . Aur iska aapko koi paisa bhi nahi milta lakin iska ye Matlab nahi ki aap 1 ya 2 month koi update na de. Me iska samrthan nahi karta. Khani mane bhi likhi thi wo real thi lakin bz hone ke karn mene update dena band kr diya saal se. Lakin me 1 ya 2 month baad update du wo galat ha kyoki reader kitna intzar kre. Aap aate ho aur Phir gayab ho jate ho. Ye galat ha

Sushant jee shayad aapne me comment pura nahi pada bus ek paise wali line padli maine to khud kaha tha ki paise yaha kisi writer ko nahi milte par readers ka appreciation to mil sakta hai agar koi writer apni life ke kai din kisi story ko likhne me lagata hai to kya wo itna expect bhi nahi kar sakta.

Rahi baat buzy hone ki to kya aap ye bata sakte ho ki aap kab buslzy hone wale ho kab nahi agar koi writer koi story chalu kare aur aadhi story likh kar wo beemar ho jae to aapke hisab se use beemari me bhi story likhte rehna chahiye kyuki usne ek story chalu kardi thi. Yani story chalu karte time wo busy nahi tha wo har waqt us story ke liye free rahe. Bhale hi ghar me koi function ho wk beemar ho par story likhna band nahi hona chahiye.

Ab aate hai story ke bare aapki rai par to aap ek reader ho kuchh bhi soch sakte ho uska mai kuch nahi kar sakta. Par jaisa aapne kaha ki aap story se shuru se jude hai to shayad aapne updates skip kar karke pade hai kyuki maine lakhan vineeta emotional roop ko bhi kai baar dikhaya shayad use aapne pada hi nahi. Padte to apko Lakhan aur Vineeta ki story samajh aati aur aap ye na kehte ki ek saheli par man aa jane ki Lakhan ne itna sab taam jhaam kara. Sach me aapki is soch ko ikkis topo ki salami hai.

Shayad aapko chudai ke updates hi padne me maza ata hai isliye aapne sirf is baat par dhyan diya ki story ka main charectar ko sex nahi karwaya par bina sex karae unhone dheeme dheeme ek doosre ke kareeb laya is par apka koi dhyaan nahi gaya. Story me me 7 kirdaar hai to har kirdaar ki story ek jaisi to nahi ho sakti. Sex ke bare me apka commenf ki agar kisi ki chut se paani niklal raha hai to wo kutte se bhi chuda lega to is logic ke hisab se agar kisi mard ka lund khada ho to wo kutiya ko bhi chod dega. Kaafi voilent aur gandi soch hai Hum life me kai logo ke prati attracted hote par uska matlab ye nahi hum sabke sath sex karte hai.

Aur rahi baat apke samartha karne ya na karne ki to agar aapne bhi story likhi hai to har ki life me ups and down aate rehte. Insaan ka mood har waqt ek jaisa nahi reh sakta Kabhi insaan khush hota hai to kabhi kisi problem me bhi hota jab wo update nahi likh pata. To agar apko ye baat samajh sakte ho to theek nahi to aap mat kare samarthan. Aapki ichha ho to aap story se jude rahe aur na ichha ho to mat pade. Waise bhi agar aapke comments ki baat karu to kewal char comment hai aapke is story me jinme se do negative hai to agar samarthan ki baat karu aisa koi samrthan nahi mila mujhe aapse.

Reades story padne tab aate hai jab wo free hote khali hote hai adha ek ghante me story padi agar appreciating natute ke hai to comment kara par us update ko likhne me writer apna bahut samay deta hai. Use ek mood chahiye hota hai koi update likhne ke liye. Ye baat shayad apko samajh nahi aaega.

Ab apko ye galat lagta hai to mai uska kuch nahi kar sakta but meri personal life meri apni hai aur mai update tab hi likh paunga aur de paunga jab mera mind bhi tension free ho.

Apke char comment ke liye shukriya.

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