Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

[critic_honest]

Loved every word of this update! I have to keep my review short due to time.

I'll confess, for the very first time, Meera and Piyush felt exciting together. I was on edge during their solo moment at the concert. While nothing romantic or sexual was expected, but making them spend time alone because of unavoidable circumstances was exciting —perhaps the beginning of something new which Krish didn't plan lol!

Damn!! That concert incident and how it all pulled off was absolutely brilliant. It was amazing how fate brought Piyush and Meera together before Maitree and Krish arrived at the location and their need to sit together added a thrilling element. 
Sure, the seating arrangement could have sorted out once Meera came to meet them but honestly its not that much of a fuss that Meera and Piyush kept sitting together. All were friends there and everybody knew each other. Here Piyush and Meera were already sitting together and sometimes it happens that people keep sitting where they were already sitting. 
Noone was stranger to one another and its not like they were sitting hundreds of meter's away. 
          Perhaps Maitree was already settled when Meera got there, and it’s perfectly normal for people to stick to their seats. The camaraderie among friends made it less of a fuss. I really appreciate how you crafted this scenario, Krish!

I never felt the need of Desai coming there. Obviously it sounded fishy when Desai was also there with a date. Ofcourse he intended to see if Meera gets jealous. He had told Krish that things would be better soon and this is what he is doing to bring the spark again. Rather I was more interested in knowing what Meera and Piyush talked during the whole show. Piyush must have used this precious time to impress and make comfortable to a level that she didn't think of switching seats.

Kudos to you for such a clever development dear author! You truly are a genius, Krish!