17-10-2024, 10:07 PM 
		
	
	
		You wrote it very much like an experienced writer! loved it through the end. You definitely have talent, hope you're planning to write more. I suggest you try writing seduction with intricate dialogues and slow seduction, i think you're capable of it. Hoping to see you soon with another story. Good luck!
	
	
	
	
	

 
 

 

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