14-10-2024, 06:11 PM
(14-10-2024, 02:00 PM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: Thanks for all of your suggestions of character pic. But i need genuine review about the update.
One more thing - i want to update Index on 1st page. So suggest me suitable heading for each updates from update-23 to update-29
To be honest bro after the update 24 every update felt like a same because of back to back intimacy btw jaya and reghu...even though there was characterisation development btw jaya,reghu and connection btw reghu and jaya family it's more like same act was repeating... But this update 29 was really a perfect way of writing and the update was a peak one... It was more realistic..and i would like to share what I liked most...
1) slow burn intimacy moment btw reghu and ahimsa was really good.. Even though reghu has jaya and ahimsa has vikek there is something making them to feel for each other..
2) struggle of reghu.. He don't want to betray jaya but at the same time he can't avoid enjoying ahimsa body was really good
3) jaya jealousy towards ahimsa and how she good handle it in future was really good...
And i would like give you one suggestion bro if you don't mind... Pls make these kind of update bro.. Take it lively and make it build the tension btw each other.. Pls don't make them have intimacy within 1 or 2 meeting.. That's it's bro thanks for this update