11-10-2024, 08:34 PM
(10-10-2024, 06:37 AM)iCuby Wrote: Very very repeatating now. It's now like an arrangement. Exchange of work kind of thing. No in the moment things... Adultery, cheating, manipulation nothing. It's now kind of planned arrangement kind of thing. This story had potential to become the best story but it loses its charm. The main character Shipra felt so different from first 10 chapters and recent chapters. Why she is so edgy.... I don't understand. My favourite story I'm always waiting for to read become boring. That's why I am frustrated
Sorry mate... I hope next few chapters are as per your expectation.