11-10-2024, 08:25 PM
(07-10-2024, 12:10 AM)qazmlp Wrote: Awesome writing dude. Great sexual tension n energy.
All the Best going ahead.
A question though ,the side story, is that Saad goimg to be the Super-Villain in this story? Dont keep the suspense for long. Integrate the 2 story lines together soon enough.
And whats with Toppo? Bring him in too if possible.
The stories will merge in next couple of chapters.
Toppo will also come into picture soon along with Bhiva