09-10-2024, 03:34 PM
(23-09-2024, 09:39 PM)Hero24600 Wrote: dosto mai janta hu ki maeri story ki disha aur likhna ka tareeka original jaisa nhi hoga. kyuki jab writer likhta hai to uske man me kuch vichar aur uska sochne ka tareeka hota hai ki wo story ko kaha le jaana chahta hai. jo ki unique hota hai. lekin mere likhne aur sochne ka tareeka alag hai.
to agar ye kahani apko pasand na aaye to jarur bataye mai iske aage nhi badhaunga. aur koi mistake ho ya advice ho to wo bhi de.
Bhai, aap ne achha likha hai, keep it up. Muze job me time nahi mil pata aage sochne k liye, lekin khush hun ki aap is kahani ko aage badha rahe ho.
Jaisa Manju Roy chahti hain wo ho sakta hai, agar aap back ja k dekho, jab Madhu diwali vacation me Hyderabad aayi to uska pahala round unke ghar me hua,
Sona ne Cctv on kar k dekhne ka try kiya, lekin fir kuch der aldi jaldi me rakh diya, aur uske dimag se utar gaya ki Cctv me record bhi hua hoga.
Evening me Sandy ne aa k dekha ki uska Laptop bed pe tha, usko laga ki Sona ne kuch Kaam se laptop liya hoga. Cctv ka switch bhi on tha, jo Sandy ne band kiya lekin is baat pe dhyan nahi diya ki Sona ne wo on kyu kiya, usko laga ki shayad galti se on kar diya aur off karna bhool gayi.
Sandip kuch din baad Sona ki purani recording dekhne k liye try karega tab usko Madhu ka kaarnama dekhne ko milega.
Aage apne hisab se likho jaisa Manju Roy ne kaha. Achha likhte ho aap bhi.
Thanks