07-10-2024, 12:10 AM
Awesome writing dude. Great sexual tension n energy.
All the Best going ahead.
A question though ,the side story, is that Saad goimg to be the Super-Villain in this story? Dont keep the suspense for long. Integrate the 2 story lines together soon enough.
And whats with Toppo? Bring him in too if possible.
All the Best going ahead.
A question though ,the side story, is that Saad goimg to be the Super-Villain in this story? Dont keep the suspense for long. Integrate the 2 story lines together soon enough.
And whats with Toppo? Bring him in too if possible.