Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

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Okay , so this is my first comment ever in xossipy and please read it for fun not anything serious , and please ignore grammatically mistake . Its not summary , criticism , or anything just random thoughts and comments
 Krish and his creation made me to make a comment . Krish you are an amazing writer , all your stories well structured, perfect grammer, vocabulary, the detailing in erotic scenes is all well done. You are phenomenal . You should focus on writing i mean in general not only in xossipy lol but keep on creating stuff for xossipy too . You should put your work in Literotica too man .

Now come on story , This is greatly writtern but very poor story and weakest in all three , 2nd is Great the ending of 2nd Part is great ( this is just an opinion of mine , not that i am criticising the writer)

Good analysis!

Few things I agree and few I do not agree but we agree to disagree.

I agree on these things.

1. Part II should have been the last one as it has perfect bonding and beautiful ending. III made it complicated and The biggest issue with part 3 is it made Meera's character confusing. Inconsistent character behaviors. She has cheated with her boss for no reason and yet blaming Krish for Jai and trying to end the marriage. Desai says to Krish that you have no idea how much she suffered with guilt from her cheating with Jai...I mean common really, what about your boss. No guilt? Her character has flashes of old Meera(Instances like adamant on no sex when Krish is on bed after accident) and new Meera whom we do not recognize who wouldn't go with Krish for a drive but who goes to temples and parties with Desai with out any hesitation and top of that she blames Krish on what would our neighbors think during their fight. Her character is messed up. Confused actions, words says her love for Krish..actions says she has feelings for Desai.

2. Yes hero ending for Krish is needed but that is not needed any more if Desai is truly changed and loving Meera rather than scheming things to get to Meera. We do not know yet if he is scheming or changed with this new plot. So we have to wait and see. If he is changed then what Krish needs is answers, loads of answers from Meera and not redemption. Though agree with your statement that Krish has been degraded further in this part and made pathetic to the point that he is still imagining Desai and Meera as just few days back he almost thought he lost Meera to Desai. Now wtf was that i do not know. How can a person who thought he lost his wife to a guy a day back can come back and  jerk on the same person fcking his wife again. This is not even cuckoldry.

I do not agree on these points.

1. 
"Krish is not cuckold but Meera is slut .[ Slut as in not in derogatory sense but in PROMISCUOUS way ]

I think Meera manipulated Krish into all these cuckold thing , slowly planted the seed in his mind and letting it grow to the point where she is living with him but fulfilling wifey duties to desai."

Lol no way this is true.
Lets take first instance of cheating and see how story unfolded. Do you think Meera planted the arc with Sunny? When she gave in to Sunny on her bed, she didn't know Krish was under the bed. He gave her a ring and saved her. So what would a normal husband should do? Did he confront her? No he got excited..that's the seed for his cuckoldry but it was not planted by Meera. Many instances with Shekhar were self inflicted wounds by Cuckold Krish. Meera would have never fcked her boss if not for Krish's constant encouragement. Same applies with Das and Desai, Meera rejected Das for a whole year even though she got separated from Krish, she only gave in to Das when she knew Krish is pushing Das towards her as a friend, In case of Desai she mentioned multiple times to Krish not to talk and meet with Desai but Krish made friendship and brought him into their lives , trying to be a hero for Ananya. I do not see any secret planning from Meera to instigate Krish towards his cuck nature but yes she gives in for his fantasies as she enjoys them too.
Yes she did cheat him multiple times on her own account with out Krish but so did Krish. He cheated her with Ananya and Sheetal. So no point name calling her slut while Krish gets clean chit.

2.

"Meera does not love Krish"

Again disagree on this one. She loves him as much as Krish loves her. Yes she jumps gun and ended the marriage as soon as Krish pushed her towards Piyush according to her and blamed her for cheating him in their own home. Doesn't mean she doesn't love him, fights and separations do not define love. For her reaction if you feel she does not love her, what would you say for Krish's flirtatious behavior towards Maithrei? His intimacy towards Parvati? His pervert nature against Nidhi? Being cuck for your wife is different but these are not actions of a man in love with his wife. Cheating your wife in your mind is equal to cheating her in real.
"There is no reason for Meera to not leave krish she can leave him anytime she wants" Yes of course and your reason why she did not do it is because of society and her stability towards Krish as a husband.
I think the reason she did not leave Krish is simple because she loves him. Yes like I said before there are inconsistencies in her arc but her essence i think is still intact.

"Ananya was good for krish"

No, she was not good for Krish. Krish is grade c cuck. He gets pleasure from seeing his wife fcked by 3rd person. If he doesn't have those moments he wouldn't even fuck properly. Meera is the only one who can provide that to him wholeheartedly and no other women. People think Krish is good by himself and can live happily with some lady. That's not true, he won't survive with out Meera. The one year they have been separated he was constantly behind Meera , trying to protect her from Sam and ended up giving her to Das. He doesn't need another women to get redemption. he needs self realization, pain. Lot of pain from which old krish dies and a new Krish is born. He will get that kind of pain only from seeing Meera fall for another guy. So for different reason I agree Meera should go for Desai for at least next 3-4 chapters before she returns back to him. Pain from losing her will cleanse him and his nature. Every one wants cinematic rivalry and Krish kicking Desai like Das lol
Desai is no more villain here, new chapters erased his sins. Only if new plot is evolved where its shown as if he is still trying to separate Krish and Meera then probably there is a chance for Krish to evolve as Hero otherwise there is no marvel movie here.


3.
"As of the story of Meera and Krish is officially over now, there is not enough love and attraction left between them which makes Meera to leave everything for Krish"

Attraction is lost but not love. 
So lets see what's going on here, Desai is gone from their lives but they feel his presence. So what would any sane husband do? Keep his wife away from him or make her meet with Desai every week? Why do you always give choice to your wife, "Hey Honey Desai wants to meet, lets go" ..I mean what the f. Didn't you face enough from Desai? The man clearly tells you that he loves your wife and Krish giving him ample opportunities to meet and greet every week. 

He offered Meera for baby and her problem to have baby is not to lose Job then why don't Krish take a break from work. Why is his agency so important , it can run with a manager. A family can give the time for these two to rekindle their chemistry and bonding, but Krish wouldn't take it.

Why would this guy mess his own life like he is on a secret agenda hidden from readers? First he flirts and messes his mind with Maithrei, he thinks its sport. She kissed him and its not a joke lol
Second, he hides the recorder again in 3rd bedroom. Stupidity.
Third, Instead of giving his wife love both emotionally and physically , he is trying hard to widen the gap between them, He won't perform on bed, he won't spend time with her. Instead our hero still imagines Desai and Meera. OMG you are right on one thing, Krish has been made worse than cuck in this part.

The story from here has only one path if the couple has to end up with each other
1. Meera has to own mistakes and self realization that she is equally responsible for adventures, and she has to open up to Krish and not hide anything anymore. Confessing something like Jai to Desai and not to Krish is breach of trust.
2. Meera has to realize that Desai though better in many ways to Krish, She has to choose Krish by love and her own choice not due to marriage. She needs to accept that only Krish's love is unconditional in this whole world for her. No one else loves her as much as him and she needs this realization by herself and not some like Nidhi in old ending.
3. Most critical one - KRISH HAS TO CHANGE! He needs to fucking stop his cuck nature. Its destroying him and Meera's love for him.

Above things when they happen , couple getting back together is possible so the plot is yet not over. and their story is not yet over.