05-10-2024, 02:04 PM
Okay , so this is my first comment ever in xossipy and please read it for fun not anything serious , and please ignore grammatically mistake . Its not summary , criticism , or anything just random thoughts and comments
Krish and his creation made me to make a comment . Krish you are an amazing writer , all your stories well structured, perfect grammer, vocabulary, the detailing in erotic scenes is all well done. You are phenomenal . You should focus on writing i mean in general not only in xossipy lol but keep on creating stuff for xossipy too . You should put your work in Literotica too man .
Now come on story , This is greatly writtern but very poor story and weakest in all three , 2nd is Great the ending of 2nd Part is great ( this is just an opinion of mine , not that i am criticising the writer)
Now I know this is just a story , but boy this one messed up my mind , I was addicted to this story always coming back to read it , and only one or two chapter were enough for raising the heat .
But hate this story , The ending of Part III was acceptable untill writer decides to rewrite this story , restarting this story was the biggest mistake of writer , writer should have just focus on new creation , by touching it the story is so messed up that its gonna be challange for writer to tying the loose ends, thats just my opinion , though the orignal ending was also not good , its like meera was like year random dude just cum in but hey we are hubby and wife , no cumming from now on and happy ending , i was expecting some kind of hero moment just like in PARPT II where krish knocked down das and claimed the women lol , so filmy but it could have work , coz KRISH IS NOT WEAK ASS LAME DUDE , and I do think that Krish is not even CUCK or fit for CUCK lifestyle .Being a cuckold and Having fantasy of seeing his wife having sex with someone else totally different thing .
[PART III] Should be named as Tranformation of Krish from Stud to Cuck .
43 chapters and there is not single hero moment for krish , All 43 chapters were focused on Meera and Desai , hell even if like story is transformed from there is no meera without krish to there is no meera without desai , There is not even a single relief for krish like Ananya , Man i think you butchered the character of ananya , she was great backup for krish if things go south . All 43 chapters krish just witnessing all the debauchary but there is not single line for krish not a moment where Krish felt like Krish , atleast in previous Part Krish was good dude and women were attracted towards him and he can have any women he wants , but in part III i think the writer just wanted to make krish a cuck so all the focus on Meera . Writer turned meera in slut.
I read the re written version of chapters , and the conclusion i reached that The official story of meera and Krish is over , there is no going back , Krish already lost , Part III depicted the meera in a way where its impossible for her to come back to krish , even if she did its not gonna be natural she will be making sacrifice just for the sake of her husband . So official story of meera and krish is over now . I beleive not sure that writer already annouced that he was thinking about writing part 4 and 5 , which is not gonna possible without splitting meera and krish and thats okay , thought i like them as couple but meera went too far .
Problem with Character of Krish
See Krish is not some kind loser character he is charismatic character , women loves him . Out of all women character almost all women preffered krish over desai anyday ( i know people will say desai has money big dick fuck great ) , so writer's efforts turning Krish into epic cuck does not feel natural , NO matter how may dudes meera fuck and even krish accepted to father other men child krish does not seem to fit the description because the First two Part of story established him as Average Perfect Men i mean to me its like it, the previous story where krish is husband of meera and in part III krish is pimp of meera lol , its like writer is forcing cuckness on krish , all the debauchary meera had there is always because krish wants it ,right thats what most of the meera and desai defenders claimed . okay I have theory here
Theory :- ( just for fun i mean nobody points it out so i m saying it , if someone already did then sorry didnt read thousand comments lol )
Krish is not cuckold but Meera is slut .[ Slut as in not in derogatory sense but in PROMISCUOUS way ]
I think meera manipulated krish into all these cuckold thing , slowly planted the seed in his mind and letting it grow to the point where she is living with him but fulfilling wifey duties to desai.
From part I, she just went on walk with random stranger and had sex with him in park
She also had sex with Anand not once but twice , she enjoyed and then went to krish said sorry , krish was not involved. Many will argue he could have stopped her but how he was manipulated and braishwashed .
One more thing the misconception among viewers , Being cuckold does not mean that it has same effect on your parter too , In this case even if we assumed that Krish was born cuckold then why the hell meera turned out to be slut ? If your partner is cuck does it make you slut ? or vice verse if your partner is slut does it make you cuck ? . No Meera at any point could have stopped all these nonsence , she could have divorce krish like sorry hubby not a slut not gonna sleep with random dude so you can jack off instead of fucking your wife . That is why it feels odd for krish to be natural cuck . Meera is a slut she had sexual relationship with men without krish knowledge was that part of krish cuckness or meera wanted to explore or wanted to have sex with those men untill she find desai , After 43 chapter there was not single parapgraph where we see love between cuck couple flourishing , its deteriorating to the point where meera does not even care or bother asking his persmission , its just desai hey i wanna bang meera and meera alway looks to krish , confuse , then desai lift her and bang her , Its like she is not looking for permission but she was looking if krish deny it or not . Both desai and meera become unofficial Husband and wife and krish is Paying guest . Meera do all that little things with desai what couple do in front of kirsh and not even hiding it , its like she accepted that krish does not mind even he did she can blame on it , its you who bring him in our life and i cant simply cutt him off coz dick is too good but was it really krish idea or it was meera's plan all along , to create a situation where she can openly fuck desai and if something foes south she can pin it on Krish perfect checkmate . They are having sex behind krish , when krish ask her she said yeah we did here there *giggles* and then dress up and leave for office then she come back make dinner fuck desai again krish ask yes we fuck *giggles* leave for office lmao . Krish is cagged parrot of Meera or Prisoner of meera . Krish is her showpiece for world if anything goes wrong we all know who is taking the blame .
Meera does not love Krish :-
Meera actually does not love krish its the fear of loosoing her husband . She does not love him and also does not want to loose him there is difference after so many years living together as couple , couples develop some kind of comfort and stablity , Meera fears to loose it. In Part III There is nothing from meera side to contribute . In Part II she was atleast jealous . In Part III there is nothing Krish got on meera , There is no reason for meera to not leave krish she can leave him anytime she wants ( again just assumption from previous chapters ) On the other way krish became more obsessed , more jealouse , more insecure . It creates the Imbalance between the characters , Where one is so obsessed and other is too free from fear of loosing other . This is perfect recipe for Disaster in Relationship even in original story meera just broke up with krish without any hesitation or writers didnt write more on this ( we can give some points to meera that writer was rushing the story so there was not enough words to justidy meera action ) but comeone she fucking desai but when piyush question came she got angry and broke up with krish instead of closing all the nonsence kicking desai out her house and holding krish accountable and shutting his request and fantasy for forever and leading charge of their life . Nope she just ended their relationship in an istant there was no fear of living life without krish or anything , while krish was toremented by that , this create imbalance and result in implosion .
Krish is her husband and just like for many indian women she is tied to him . She fucked up Krish relationship with ananya because ananya was only woman who loves krish wholeheartedly hell she even told him to leave meera and be with him , at first i thought its stupid coz meera and krish love each other but after 43 chapter i am like kaha ho ananya laut aayo ab lol . Ananya was good for krish , atleast she was the one who can give him solace , She should have been in Part III as someone who can give affection to krish just like nidhi and parvati did . As opposed to meera in Part III there is no spark no love no admiration nothingn , Its like now meera is on track and working towards her plan , Make krish cuck . To creat a cuckboy out of her Dear krish . Thats when she learned that ananya was in love with krish and krish is mingling with other women she got jealouse and went with desai and later told the truth to ananya when ananya was so vulnerable after spending night with krish . She could not stand krish going off with other women because Krish is her safety net , becase in the end no matter how many men she fucks at the end of the day her cucky husband is there for her. People always says that its krish who forced her to fuck okay lets accept this she is obedient women who fucks when krish says then why she does not leave desai when krish says ? But no she defend desai and always take his side and always priasing him in front of her husband , a couple knows these basic thinig what not to speak in front of their spouses , but she is so free she knows krish will never object any of her behaviour coz in krish mind its him who enables all of it . And writer also didnt wrote anythingin favor of krish krish is character not voice over or silent observer.
[ i know i am sound like women hating incel but its just a theory for fun and enjoyment it could be wrong matlb pura hi galat lol ]
Here i am concluding
Earlier Conclusion :-
As of the story of meera and Krish is officially over now, there is not enough love and attraction left between them which makes meera to leave everything for krish . There is no Women Character to challenge Meera i mean there are but they are from desai side lol , I mean no Women character who loves krish and make meera insecure and jealouse to remind him that her husband is not loser that KRISH is not loser, women which makes even krish to question himself that if he really loves meera or not, a women which makes him realize that he doesnt have cuck feeling around her . After 43 chapter the Krish is kind of loser not actual loser we know its all good and consensual Krish is driving the Bus its all him i got it Happy ab . But cmon Desai and meera are getting dollars atleast leave some penny for krish . The thing is Krish is not realising all of this because he enjoys it but we as viewer see this lol .
As of now Krish value is all time low no women to love him no one to supports him and no one for his mental peace no one to challange Meera claimed on her Parrot cuck hubby and also krish Masculanity is all time low he cant even stand or claimed what belongs to him He tried tricks to break meera and desai really dude its your wife and you need tricks to end affair between your wife and desai lmao . I read the story and i feel completly detached [which is very good thing coz story is so greatly written you get addicted to it ] and story of meera and desai is officially begun .
I feel the focus is now solely on the jouney of destruction of krish as character .
I know that this is cuckold story which feels very different from another great writer VYASA on Literotica , the essence of these story is purely based on torment, humialition, defeat , and depressed ending ( as we viewer see but the husband enjoy this thing ) of Husband who become cuck in this case Krish my boy you have to suffer a lot of humialiotion jealousy defeat . I just want some relief for krish character , still i cant see krish as cuck coz he does not hit all point of cuck . I wish writer just give some hero moment or some kind of relief to krish , man 43 chapters guy didnt even had any relief if we read original ending meera just broke up with him in an instant all love marriage years down the sink in an instant while krish because he is half cuck took it and leave .
I think the value of Krish is low in Part III he is just there as observer and bound to loose .
Most Viewer Expectation :-
The amount of support of Meera and desai get baffled me i mean why dude , Just becase desai has big dick and fuck well does not mean he and meera are destined for together . There is difference between marriage and Affair . Why do these people hate krish so much , to the point where they suggest that desai should pregnant meera and krish commits suicide , i mean what are you mad ?
One more thing i observed that Indian audience as general always look for most devastating ending ever , more fucked up , most depressing , i mean like total destruction they just want Lead character to suffer and tormented as if they commited some heinous crime .
I think that in our country Sex is taboo subject and Peole see it as some sort of sin , whoever commits it must face judgement day . So in all Erotic stories where ever the debauchary happens there should some kind punishment and torment for both women and men .
Here is the destruction for krish and hatred shows this , just because krish decided to explore his fantasy he must pay the price and should commit suicide because he commited mistake by letting her wife sex with other men so he must suffer utter defeat and humialiation .
Conclusion 2 :-
Now the Meera and Krish story is out of picture , The future chapter solely focused in Transformation of krish to complete cuck , and he is also gonna be main character of those chapter where we see story revolves around him and how he react to them. Its like even after meera leave krish get another girl and then someone come fuck her and this goes on and on i mean not in negative way but cuck as lifestyle where he is working earning good having a good lifestyle but meera seed is still in his mind maybe meera too .
Dark fantasy of other viewer's or how they want the story to end :-
I read some of the comment i think that most people wants .
Scenario 1 :- Krish with dog collar on his knees in front of his marital bed and in bed desai is fucking meera and desai belittling kirsh humialting him mocking while he fucking meera hard and meera laughing on krish , and gaslighting him and letting him clean her just after desai finished with her ( btw so nasty ) lol and devoid him of any pleasure and she will not let him to go any women coz he is afraid of loosing her husband not krish
Scenario 2 :- Krish transformed into cuck . Meera deny having any kid with krish but when desai demand it she accepts it . Desai and Meera and have two kids and Krish accepted them . And now Krish and meera living together but meera is commited to Desai . They either moved to Desai place dont know the name or krish and meera live in their house while desai visit them and fuck meera nd meera says thanks cucky husband happy end.
Scenario 3 :- This is most Ridiculous
Meera left krish for desai and desai made her pregnant and then leave her another young women , Meera pregnant depressed heartbroken return to krish and krish accepted her and they are living they marital life again while raising desai kid
In all these conclusion Krish will and bound to loose , I dont know how writer gonna do justice with krish character or even if writer is actually interested in giving any redemption arc to krish . Its like writer holding on some grudes against krish , chapters after chapter there is nothing for krish which uplift krish as character , no women to praise him , no women to love him apart from nidhi and parvati but those were side character not something serious , nothing which makes meera insecure or which makes meera to feel threathen or jealous or fear of loosing krish not her husband , there is nothing for krish of couse you could say i am biased towards krish coz he is the hero and this is epic story if it was any other story with 20 to 30 pages i would not have care but dude this is epic saga and it deserves Good ending for Hero Krish . Or Its request to writer atleast do one fan service and give krish some kind of relief where he wins atleast once , Just to balance the story .
Suggestions :- My suggestion is that there should be Strong Female character for Krish , who loves him or attracted to him , Flirts with him , then became obsessed with him , upto the point which makes Meera to feel jealousy , Insecurity, fear of loosing krish . and also make krish to question himself if he truly loves only meera and his cuckold feeling dont work with that women . thats my suggestions .
Final conclusion :- In think now the story accepted its theme of Cuckoldery not that there was not any mention of it lol . i mean to say at first it was fantasy which is good not its cuckoldery the torment of krish started . Now its just Krish Story i mean i am gonna read it like because at first it was story of couple meera and krish , but PART III just fucked up their relationship in epic way , Now only krish remains and Uski tanhai lol .
Thats just me i know its exaggeration , its my first time lol , i like the story too much later i realize i like the relationship Krish and Meera not all the erotic hardcore sex detailing , And character of krish too. thats why my comment is biased towards krish but not becasue he is man and meera is women so its all meera fault because of character .
Lets see Whats krish gonna do , to throw off the reader is what writers do , Krish is One of those writer . Best of luck bro .
Krish and his creation made me to make a comment . Krish you are an amazing writer , all your stories well structured, perfect grammer, vocabulary, the detailing in erotic scenes is all well done. You are phenomenal . You should focus on writing i mean in general not only in xossipy lol but keep on creating stuff for xossipy too . You should put your work in Literotica too man .
Now come on story , This is greatly writtern but very poor story and weakest in all three , 2nd is Great the ending of 2nd Part is great ( this is just an opinion of mine , not that i am criticising the writer)
Now I know this is just a story , but boy this one messed up my mind , I was addicted to this story always coming back to read it , and only one or two chapter were enough for raising the heat .
But hate this story , The ending of Part III was acceptable untill writer decides to rewrite this story , restarting this story was the biggest mistake of writer , writer should have just focus on new creation , by touching it the story is so messed up that its gonna be challange for writer to tying the loose ends, thats just my opinion , though the orignal ending was also not good , its like meera was like year random dude just cum in but hey we are hubby and wife , no cumming from now on and happy ending , i was expecting some kind of hero moment just like in PARPT II where krish knocked down das and claimed the women lol , so filmy but it could have work , coz KRISH IS NOT WEAK ASS LAME DUDE , and I do think that Krish is not even CUCK or fit for CUCK lifestyle .Being a cuckold and Having fantasy of seeing his wife having sex with someone else totally different thing .
[PART III] Should be named as Tranformation of Krish from Stud to Cuck .
43 chapters and there is not single hero moment for krish , All 43 chapters were focused on Meera and Desai , hell even if like story is transformed from there is no meera without krish to there is no meera without desai , There is not even a single relief for krish like Ananya , Man i think you butchered the character of ananya , she was great backup for krish if things go south . All 43 chapters krish just witnessing all the debauchary but there is not single line for krish not a moment where Krish felt like Krish , atleast in previous Part Krish was good dude and women were attracted towards him and he can have any women he wants , but in part III i think the writer just wanted to make krish a cuck so all the focus on Meera . Writer turned meera in slut.
I read the re written version of chapters , and the conclusion i reached that The official story of meera and Krish is over , there is no going back , Krish already lost , Part III depicted the meera in a way where its impossible for her to come back to krish , even if she did its not gonna be natural she will be making sacrifice just for the sake of her husband . So official story of meera and krish is over now . I beleive not sure that writer already annouced that he was thinking about writing part 4 and 5 , which is not gonna possible without splitting meera and krish and thats okay , thought i like them as couple but meera went too far .
Problem with Character of Krish
See Krish is not some kind loser character he is charismatic character , women loves him . Out of all women character almost all women preffered krish over desai anyday ( i know people will say desai has money big dick fuck great ) , so writer's efforts turning Krish into epic cuck does not feel natural , NO matter how may dudes meera fuck and even krish accepted to father other men child krish does not seem to fit the description because the First two Part of story established him as Average Perfect Men i mean to me its like it, the previous story where krish is husband of meera and in part III krish is pimp of meera lol , its like writer is forcing cuckness on krish , all the debauchary meera had there is always because krish wants it ,right thats what most of the meera and desai defenders claimed . okay I have theory here
Theory :- ( just for fun i mean nobody points it out so i m saying it , if someone already did then sorry didnt read thousand comments lol )
Krish is not cuckold but Meera is slut .[ Slut as in not in derogatory sense but in PROMISCUOUS way ]
I think meera manipulated krish into all these cuckold thing , slowly planted the seed in his mind and letting it grow to the point where she is living with him but fulfilling wifey duties to desai.
From part I, she just went on walk with random stranger and had sex with him in park
She also had sex with Anand not once but twice , she enjoyed and then went to krish said sorry , krish was not involved. Many will argue he could have stopped her but how he was manipulated and braishwashed .
One more thing the misconception among viewers , Being cuckold does not mean that it has same effect on your parter too , In this case even if we assumed that Krish was born cuckold then why the hell meera turned out to be slut ? If your partner is cuck does it make you slut ? or vice verse if your partner is slut does it make you cuck ? . No Meera at any point could have stopped all these nonsence , she could have divorce krish like sorry hubby not a slut not gonna sleep with random dude so you can jack off instead of fucking your wife . That is why it feels odd for krish to be natural cuck . Meera is a slut she had sexual relationship with men without krish knowledge was that part of krish cuckness or meera wanted to explore or wanted to have sex with those men untill she find desai , After 43 chapter there was not single parapgraph where we see love between cuck couple flourishing , its deteriorating to the point where meera does not even care or bother asking his persmission , its just desai hey i wanna bang meera and meera alway looks to krish , confuse , then desai lift her and bang her , Its like she is not looking for permission but she was looking if krish deny it or not . Both desai and meera become unofficial Husband and wife and krish is Paying guest . Meera do all that little things with desai what couple do in front of kirsh and not even hiding it , its like she accepted that krish does not mind even he did she can blame on it , its you who bring him in our life and i cant simply cutt him off coz dick is too good but was it really krish idea or it was meera's plan all along , to create a situation where she can openly fuck desai and if something foes south she can pin it on Krish perfect checkmate . They are having sex behind krish , when krish ask her she said yeah we did here there *giggles* and then dress up and leave for office then she come back make dinner fuck desai again krish ask yes we fuck *giggles* leave for office lmao . Krish is cagged parrot of Meera or Prisoner of meera . Krish is her showpiece for world if anything goes wrong we all know who is taking the blame .
Meera does not love Krish :-
Meera actually does not love krish its the fear of loosoing her husband . She does not love him and also does not want to loose him there is difference after so many years living together as couple , couples develop some kind of comfort and stablity , Meera fears to loose it. In Part III There is nothing from meera side to contribute . In Part II she was atleast jealous . In Part III there is nothing Krish got on meera , There is no reason for meera to not leave krish she can leave him anytime she wants ( again just assumption from previous chapters ) On the other way krish became more obsessed , more jealouse , more insecure . It creates the Imbalance between the characters , Where one is so obsessed and other is too free from fear of loosing other . This is perfect recipe for Disaster in Relationship even in original story meera just broke up with krish without any hesitation or writers didnt write more on this ( we can give some points to meera that writer was rushing the story so there was not enough words to justidy meera action ) but comeone she fucking desai but when piyush question came she got angry and broke up with krish instead of closing all the nonsence kicking desai out her house and holding krish accountable and shutting his request and fantasy for forever and leading charge of their life . Nope she just ended their relationship in an istant there was no fear of living life without krish or anything , while krish was toremented by that , this create imbalance and result in implosion .
Krish is her husband and just like for many indian women she is tied to him . She fucked up Krish relationship with ananya because ananya was only woman who loves krish wholeheartedly hell she even told him to leave meera and be with him , at first i thought its stupid coz meera and krish love each other but after 43 chapter i am like kaha ho ananya laut aayo ab lol . Ananya was good for krish , atleast she was the one who can give him solace , She should have been in Part III as someone who can give affection to krish just like nidhi and parvati did . As opposed to meera in Part III there is no spark no love no admiration nothingn , Its like now meera is on track and working towards her plan , Make krish cuck . To creat a cuckboy out of her Dear krish . Thats when she learned that ananya was in love with krish and krish is mingling with other women she got jealouse and went with desai and later told the truth to ananya when ananya was so vulnerable after spending night with krish . She could not stand krish going off with other women because Krish is her safety net , becase in the end no matter how many men she fucks at the end of the day her cucky husband is there for her. People always says that its krish who forced her to fuck okay lets accept this she is obedient women who fucks when krish says then why she does not leave desai when krish says ? But no she defend desai and always take his side and always priasing him in front of her husband , a couple knows these basic thinig what not to speak in front of their spouses , but she is so free she knows krish will never object any of her behaviour coz in krish mind its him who enables all of it . And writer also didnt wrote anythingin favor of krish krish is character not voice over or silent observer.
[ i know i am sound like women hating incel but its just a theory for fun and enjoyment it could be wrong matlb pura hi galat lol ]
Here i am concluding
Earlier Conclusion :-
As of the story of meera and Krish is officially over now, there is not enough love and attraction left between them which makes meera to leave everything for krish . There is no Women Character to challenge Meera i mean there are but they are from desai side lol , I mean no Women character who loves krish and make meera insecure and jealouse to remind him that her husband is not loser that KRISH is not loser, women which makes even krish to question himself that if he really loves meera or not, a women which makes him realize that he doesnt have cuck feeling around her . After 43 chapter the Krish is kind of loser not actual loser we know its all good and consensual Krish is driving the Bus its all him i got it Happy ab . But cmon Desai and meera are getting dollars atleast leave some penny for krish . The thing is Krish is not realising all of this because he enjoys it but we as viewer see this lol .
As of now Krish value is all time low no women to love him no one to supports him and no one for his mental peace no one to challange Meera claimed on her Parrot cuck hubby and also krish Masculanity is all time low he cant even stand or claimed what belongs to him He tried tricks to break meera and desai really dude its your wife and you need tricks to end affair between your wife and desai lmao . I read the story and i feel completly detached [which is very good thing coz story is so greatly written you get addicted to it ] and story of meera and desai is officially begun .
I feel the focus is now solely on the jouney of destruction of krish as character .
I know that this is cuckold story which feels very different from another great writer VYASA on Literotica , the essence of these story is purely based on torment, humialition, defeat , and depressed ending ( as we viewer see but the husband enjoy this thing ) of Husband who become cuck in this case Krish my boy you have to suffer a lot of humialiotion jealousy defeat . I just want some relief for krish character , still i cant see krish as cuck coz he does not hit all point of cuck . I wish writer just give some hero moment or some kind of relief to krish , man 43 chapters guy didnt even had any relief if we read original ending meera just broke up with him in an instant all love marriage years down the sink in an instant while krish because he is half cuck took it and leave .
I think the value of Krish is low in Part III he is just there as observer and bound to loose .
Most Viewer Expectation :-
The amount of support of Meera and desai get baffled me i mean why dude , Just becase desai has big dick and fuck well does not mean he and meera are destined for together . There is difference between marriage and Affair . Why do these people hate krish so much , to the point where they suggest that desai should pregnant meera and krish commits suicide , i mean what are you mad ?
One more thing i observed that Indian audience as general always look for most devastating ending ever , more fucked up , most depressing , i mean like total destruction they just want Lead character to suffer and tormented as if they commited some heinous crime .
I think that in our country Sex is taboo subject and Peole see it as some sort of sin , whoever commits it must face judgement day . So in all Erotic stories where ever the debauchary happens there should some kind punishment and torment for both women and men .
Here is the destruction for krish and hatred shows this , just because krish decided to explore his fantasy he must pay the price and should commit suicide because he commited mistake by letting her wife sex with other men so he must suffer utter defeat and humialiation .
Conclusion 2 :-
Now the Meera and Krish story is out of picture , The future chapter solely focused in Transformation of krish to complete cuck , and he is also gonna be main character of those chapter where we see story revolves around him and how he react to them. Its like even after meera leave krish get another girl and then someone come fuck her and this goes on and on i mean not in negative way but cuck as lifestyle where he is working earning good having a good lifestyle but meera seed is still in his mind maybe meera too .
Dark fantasy of other viewer's or how they want the story to end :-
I read some of the comment i think that most people wants .
Scenario 1 :- Krish with dog collar on his knees in front of his marital bed and in bed desai is fucking meera and desai belittling kirsh humialting him mocking while he fucking meera hard and meera laughing on krish , and gaslighting him and letting him clean her just after desai finished with her ( btw so nasty ) lol and devoid him of any pleasure and she will not let him to go any women coz he is afraid of loosing her husband not krish
Scenario 2 :- Krish transformed into cuck . Meera deny having any kid with krish but when desai demand it she accepts it . Desai and Meera and have two kids and Krish accepted them . And now Krish and meera living together but meera is commited to Desai . They either moved to Desai place dont know the name or krish and meera live in their house while desai visit them and fuck meera nd meera says thanks cucky husband happy end.
Scenario 3 :- This is most Ridiculous
Meera left krish for desai and desai made her pregnant and then leave her another young women , Meera pregnant depressed heartbroken return to krish and krish accepted her and they are living they marital life again while raising desai kid
In all these conclusion Krish will and bound to loose , I dont know how writer gonna do justice with krish character or even if writer is actually interested in giving any redemption arc to krish . Its like writer holding on some grudes against krish , chapters after chapter there is nothing for krish which uplift krish as character , no women to praise him , no women to love him apart from nidhi and parvati but those were side character not something serious , nothing which makes meera insecure or which makes meera to feel threathen or jealous or fear of loosing krish not her husband , there is nothing for krish of couse you could say i am biased towards krish coz he is the hero and this is epic story if it was any other story with 20 to 30 pages i would not have care but dude this is epic saga and it deserves Good ending for Hero Krish . Or Its request to writer atleast do one fan service and give krish some kind of relief where he wins atleast once , Just to balance the story .
Suggestions :- My suggestion is that there should be Strong Female character for Krish , who loves him or attracted to him , Flirts with him , then became obsessed with him , upto the point which makes Meera to feel jealousy , Insecurity, fear of loosing krish . and also make krish to question himself if he truly loves only meera and his cuckold feeling dont work with that women . thats my suggestions .
Final conclusion :- In think now the story accepted its theme of Cuckoldery not that there was not any mention of it lol . i mean to say at first it was fantasy which is good not its cuckoldery the torment of krish started . Now its just Krish Story i mean i am gonna read it like because at first it was story of couple meera and krish , but PART III just fucked up their relationship in epic way , Now only krish remains and Uski tanhai lol .
Thats just me i know its exaggeration , its my first time lol , i like the story too much later i realize i like the relationship Krish and Meera not all the erotic hardcore sex detailing , And character of krish too. thats why my comment is biased towards krish but not becasue he is man and meera is women so its all meera fault because of character .
Lets see Whats krish gonna do , to throw off the reader is what writers do , Krish is One of those writer . Best of luck bro .
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