04-10-2024, 09:40 PM
Dear author,
I like the way you write (from the point of view of the main character in the story);
partly helpless, partly insecure, partly angry, partly humiliated, partly betrayed, partly determined ...
very interesting.
The juggling between past and present is a daring game with Srinu's mind as he abandons his
rational thinking to single-mindedly move forward.
But to get to the truth, he needs his sobriety, his composure, his head free of anger and resentment...
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
I like the way you write (from the point of view of the main character in the story);
partly helpless, partly insecure, partly angry, partly humiliated, partly betrayed, partly determined ...
very interesting.
The juggling between past and present is a daring game with Srinu's mind as he abandons his
rational thinking to single-mindedly move forward.
But to get to the truth, he needs his sobriety, his composure, his head free of anger and resentment...
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda