04-10-2024, 09:53 AM
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Few liberties Author has taken to set up the plot to push Krish towards upcoming hellhole
1. When they reached the venue - Any sane couple will exchange and go back to their seats. Meaning Krish should have sat beside Meera and Piyush could have gone to Maithrei. Isn't it what was told to Piyush that he found a date for the concert? Why would Meera come all the way to Maithrei and not take her seat or send Piyush to exchange?
2. When Meera called Krish while they went to hotel for light dinner, She mentioned her status on what's going on and how come she did not ask Krish if he is on his way to drop Maithrei? Krish would have told her that he is already heading for home or already home then there is no point of hiding.
Now on to red flags and mistakes from the leads!
Krish:
I can understand Meera very well but the story even though is always Krish's POV I can never understand this guy!
1. You love walking with Meera immensely and crave for her love yet you risk everything that you have with her by not trying to perform better in bed. You can see the passion waning so what do you do to get it back, Instead of addressing the issue with her, he seems to leaving the problem as it is and not taking any proactive steps. This guy has more spark with Maithrei than Meera and its worse situation for the couple just because these two claim they die for each other but literally no communication on important topics.
2. Cuckold Krish is never going to learn. He wants to blast Desai as he used Nidhi and thinking Meera is too easy on him for using Nidhi but who will ask Krish for jerking off imagining his wife with Desai? Does he even have moral conscience at this point?
3. What this naivety on thinking that Maithrei's flirting is only a sport? Girl literally is throwing herself on him and he is pumping more gas into the fire. Rubbing thighs, not calling her out on kiss, giving hints about a future date..what the f? Does he not know that Meera is not ok with him cheating?
3. OK so Meera does not want kid by sacrificing her Job , But what would happen if Krish can talk to Desai and appoint a Manager who can handle things for couple of yrs? Isn't it too much to ask a friend who claims to care for this family? Krish should have jumped at the offer and taken it. Once kid is in Meera will never get distracted or think about Desai or missing chemistry as starting a family would have made their bond much stronger. Krish is text book written definition of a dumb fellow.
4. What is this constant urge to know what Meera will do when he is not around, He creates situations to get screwed. Will he never learn?
5. Another crazy dumb ass decision to hide recorder in 3rd bedroom. Wah by Wah, This is going to come back and bite in his ass. Either he will get caught and Meera will hate him or he will hear things that he won't like it causing rift between the couple.
Some times I feel these two are not meant for each other based on choices they make which screw them.
Meera:
1. She is obviously want to keep herself away from Desai. That's good but I am more skeptical on the intentions behind it. Does she want to stay away from Desai because she cannot control herself while she is with him or have feelings for him and want him away so she can try to be with Krish? Or Does she even love Krish at this point?
2. By mouth and her intentions she say she only wants us but obviously both of them know something is missing in their relationship since Desai left them , and Couple is not willing to communicate, Why can't she take initiative and try to address it?
3. Why didn't she send Piyush to sit with Maithrei after knowing that she was waiting for a chance to date with her husband? She thinks her intentions are pure?
4. Why is her Job more important than starting a family? If both of them cannot afford to lose a Job then can hire a nanny, Is it new concept? Or grandparents can come and stay with them, What is her real intentions behind saying no? Does she want a baby or not? Is she thinking about having baby after sorting the broken relationship with Krish? Any one with right intentions coming from such a big misunderstanding and almost breaking up will jump on this option and build better life and improve bonding with baby in family. What was she even thinking?
5. Why is she happy when she is in company of Desai and not so good when in company of her husband? Is it because they lost the passion in bed? Is that it? Doesn't she love her husband? Why do every one here reading the story get a feel that she has feelings for Desai? Jealous looks, Inquiring about other women in Desai's life. Why is she agreeing to meet with Desai every week? Krish is dumb..any one who reads this story can say that he is neither sharp nor even an avg guy with sanity. What about Meera and her intentions to see Desai every week?
Now onto the plot!
Obviously couple are headed for a heated argument and breakup. Krish's stupidity will cost him big time. he will either get caught now or will listen in on a private conversation that will break his heart. Why do I get a feel that Meera will confess about her feelings to Desai and Krish will hear it or Desai will force seduce Meera and Krish being in the room won't stop it and Meera later finding it will break up with him or worse Krish will break up with her for cheating. He left his shoes beside the bed which will reveal to Desai and Meera that he is already home and hiding.
Future holds big question marks.
1. Can Krish ever change from being a cuckold. If he remains cuckold then this story will never get a proper conclusion. So there has to be shock of his life and hard separation from Meera which should teach him a lesson that he never forgets in his life before reuniting with Meera.
2. Will Meera ever own her mistakes? Will she ever take responsibility of her part in their life turning upside down?
3. What is Desai's true game? Maithrei return into their life is coincidence or a new game from Desai? Obviously Maithrei is in control of Desai for a very long time and its easy to make a puppet of of her. Him coming to concert is no coincidence. Maithrei might have told him about it. Or Desai really loves Meera and he steals her from Krish but Meera being with Desai realizes that though she has feeling for Desai , she can only be happy with Krish? Or even worse this marriage between Krish and Meera will survive and Desai will be their weekend retreat for ever. Is that the end game? Or Meera will get Desai's baby and he will leave them for ever and Krish has to live his life with this knowledge that his cuckoldry has a consequence.
Krish back to writing story in complicated plot points and weaving it masterfully. Hope the couple mend their ways and find ways to get back to each other or even better ending find their old selves and reinvent their love and passion.
1. When they reached the venue - Any sane couple will exchange and go back to their seats. Meaning Krish should have sat beside Meera and Piyush could have gone to Maithrei. Isn't it what was told to Piyush that he found a date for the concert? Why would Meera come all the way to Maithrei and not take her seat or send Piyush to exchange?
2. When Meera called Krish while they went to hotel for light dinner, She mentioned her status on what's going on and how come she did not ask Krish if he is on his way to drop Maithrei? Krish would have told her that he is already heading for home or already home then there is no point of hiding.
Now on to red flags and mistakes from the leads!
Krish:
I can understand Meera very well but the story even though is always Krish's POV I can never understand this guy!
1. You love walking with Meera immensely and crave for her love yet you risk everything that you have with her by not trying to perform better in bed. You can see the passion waning so what do you do to get it back, Instead of addressing the issue with her, he seems to leaving the problem as it is and not taking any proactive steps. This guy has more spark with Maithrei than Meera and its worse situation for the couple just because these two claim they die for each other but literally no communication on important topics.
2. Cuckold Krish is never going to learn. He wants to blast Desai as he used Nidhi and thinking Meera is too easy on him for using Nidhi but who will ask Krish for jerking off imagining his wife with Desai? Does he even have moral conscience at this point?
3. What this naivety on thinking that Maithrei's flirting is only a sport? Girl literally is throwing herself on him and he is pumping more gas into the fire. Rubbing thighs, not calling her out on kiss, giving hints about a future date..what the f? Does he not know that Meera is not ok with him cheating?
3. OK so Meera does not want kid by sacrificing her Job , But what would happen if Krish can talk to Desai and appoint a Manager who can handle things for couple of yrs? Isn't it too much to ask a friend who claims to care for this family? Krish should have jumped at the offer and taken it. Once kid is in Meera will never get distracted or think about Desai or missing chemistry as starting a family would have made their bond much stronger. Krish is text book written definition of a dumb fellow.
4. What is this constant urge to know what Meera will do when he is not around, He creates situations to get screwed. Will he never learn?
5. Another crazy dumb ass decision to hide recorder in 3rd bedroom. Wah by Wah, This is going to come back and bite in his ass. Either he will get caught and Meera will hate him or he will hear things that he won't like it causing rift between the couple.
Some times I feel these two are not meant for each other based on choices they make which screw them.
Meera:
1. She is obviously want to keep herself away from Desai. That's good but I am more skeptical on the intentions behind it. Does she want to stay away from Desai because she cannot control herself while she is with him or have feelings for him and want him away so she can try to be with Krish? Or Does she even love Krish at this point?
2. By mouth and her intentions she say she only wants us but obviously both of them know something is missing in their relationship since Desai left them , and Couple is not willing to communicate, Why can't she take initiative and try to address it?
3. Why didn't she send Piyush to sit with Maithrei after knowing that she was waiting for a chance to date with her husband? She thinks her intentions are pure?
4. Why is her Job more important than starting a family? If both of them cannot afford to lose a Job then can hire a nanny, Is it new concept? Or grandparents can come and stay with them, What is her real intentions behind saying no? Does she want a baby or not? Is she thinking about having baby after sorting the broken relationship with Krish? Any one with right intentions coming from such a big misunderstanding and almost breaking up will jump on this option and build better life and improve bonding with baby in family. What was she even thinking?
5. Why is she happy when she is in company of Desai and not so good when in company of her husband? Is it because they lost the passion in bed? Is that it? Doesn't she love her husband? Why do every one here reading the story get a feel that she has feelings for Desai? Jealous looks, Inquiring about other women in Desai's life. Why is she agreeing to meet with Desai every week? Krish is dumb..any one who reads this story can say that he is neither sharp nor even an avg guy with sanity. What about Meera and her intentions to see Desai every week?
Now onto the plot!
Obviously couple are headed for a heated argument and breakup. Krish's stupidity will cost him big time. he will either get caught now or will listen in on a private conversation that will break his heart. Why do I get a feel that Meera will confess about her feelings to Desai and Krish will hear it or Desai will force seduce Meera and Krish being in the room won't stop it and Meera later finding it will break up with him or worse Krish will break up with her for cheating. He left his shoes beside the bed which will reveal to Desai and Meera that he is already home and hiding.
Future holds big question marks.
1. Can Krish ever change from being a cuckold. If he remains cuckold then this story will never get a proper conclusion. So there has to be shock of his life and hard separation from Meera which should teach him a lesson that he never forgets in his life before reuniting with Meera.
2. Will Meera ever own her mistakes? Will she ever take responsibility of her part in their life turning upside down?
3. What is Desai's true game? Maithrei return into their life is coincidence or a new game from Desai? Obviously Maithrei is in control of Desai for a very long time and its easy to make a puppet of of her. Him coming to concert is no coincidence. Maithrei might have told him about it. Or Desai really loves Meera and he steals her from Krish but Meera being with Desai realizes that though she has feeling for Desai , she can only be happy with Krish? Or even worse this marriage between Krish and Meera will survive and Desai will be their weekend retreat for ever. Is that the end game? Or Meera will get Desai's baby and he will leave them for ever and Krish has to live his life with this knowledge that his cuckoldry has a consequence.
Krish back to writing story in complicated plot points and weaving it masterfully. Hope the couple mend their ways and find ways to get back to each other or even better ending find their old selves and reinvent their love and passion.
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