Adultery Undercover Desires

[John446]

I Hope y oo I take it positively 

To be honestly my friend..the story has turned into a love story of Danish and kavya than an adultery story..
Throught story she kept saying that she loves Rahul but her actions prove otherwise .as soon as he is gone she doesn't even miss him for a second or feeling guilty..the truth is she never loved Rahul..
As Rahul's character is out of the story now..their would be only Danish and kavya's romance..after some time that would become boring...3rd charcter(Rahul) is important
I would say if there is no twist there is no use of dragging the story

My suggestion

1.rahul comes to suprise kavya and find out abt her affair..decides to divorce her coz he realize she has fallen in love with danish

2. Slowly Danish starts mistreating her so she herself realize her mistake 

It's just my suggestion .as a writer you know much more than me..
You have been an amazing writer so far..it's just that story is turning into a love story

Thank you so much bro for the suggestion, i have lot of ideas in my mind i did not ran out of ideas. I just wanted to know what my readers wants. Thats why i left my email id so that we can discuss