29-09-2024, 02:38 AM
(28-09-2024, 10:31 PM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: kutto bro , wat i like in this story is characterisation each of an character was unique mainly jaya and all male character you made in prefect line and the way you taking a story in prefect way length its was not too fast or to slow.. its in correct line you do this way length itself bro ..even you pick the correct size its attractive also ...you give big update like this please don't take much time bro
your going in correct track only bro keep rocking![]()
Dear Readers, thank for your good words..................... but i need a detailed review, and i want to know what you like in my story........ please post your reviews.....