Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[neelchaand]

Though this story and the author have become my most favourite because of the fantastic plot and outstanding writing, now I with great disappointment I have to say that the story is losing its charm and becoming a bit boring because of its monotonous long conversations and a regular cliff-hanging of keeping everyone waiting at the end of each chapter for the real action of Shipra's sexual ordeal along with Namrata's ordeals.

A Big Chapter 21 is almost over and we are yet to see the physical ordeals of Shipra!

The theme of the ordeal is yet to start after 21 very big chapters!

So many actions and ordeals (By Saad, the real stud; by the village politicians, by the village elders and the village youngsters etc.) could have been written by the amazing sensual writing skills of the author which could have glued the whole Xossipy Community to this story!
Alas, nothing is happening and the disappointment is growing amongst us, the readers!

However, the plot still lingers, with the conflict between Shipra's characteristic principles and Patode's persuasions.

I am afraid that keeping the avid readers waiting and disappointing so much for the theme of the ordeal will make this story lose its valuable fan base and the story may become a stagnant one and eventually lose all its charm and attraction!

I hope the author would pay attention to the expectations of the avid fans of this story and come up with some outstanding plots of ordeals for both the high-class urban ladies in the hand of rural misogynist dick-head males!

As a super fan of the author and the story, I'll keep waiting for the updates to start the ordeals for both the urban ladies in the awesome signature style of the author.