[bhola647]

Your narration skills are over the top and the way you left us at the cliff hanger, kudos to you. A request from my end for the next few chapters. Instead of switching to your wife's narration, let the events unfold over conservation between the two. In this manner, we can feel the emotional turmoil that the husband will be going through as he listens to what had happened behind his back.

Thanks for the update and wish you all the best for the next chapters.