[val.coutinho]

Read my version of the same story on my profile

Yes bro your edition of the story is also good.... But it's incomplete.... No more update after the mating of Menaka and Dara in front of Vimla..... You need to keep the thread alive by updating.... Please update it's a hot version of Aurelius's story...... Hats off to Aurelius for writing such a hot story..... I'm sure if he had to continue it would have been good.... But since you're continuing it please do it on regular basis

Waiting for an update soon.... Cheers !!!