30-12-2018, 07:25 PM
(30-12-2018, 05:40 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Story ki shurwat achi hai.. Mere liye sabse achi baat ye hai ki aapke paas story tayar hai.. Most of the time, writer extends story unnecessarily. Aapke comments se lagta hai ki aap ke pas bahot hi achi storyline tayar hai. Mujhe to bas intzar hai us story ko aap kaise likhte ho.. All d best and please take ur time and give long updates...
Thank you dear.....
You are absolutely correct about my story and mind.. I know how to express that story which is inside my mind... Kayi kahaniyon ke plot hai mere mind me... Lekin mei un sab ko mix karke khichadi nhin banaunga... Mujhe jo kahaani aapke saamne pesh karni hai use sidhe saade lafjon me pesh karunga...
Wo kehte kayi baar kuch accha pakaane ke liye kuch bhi nhi karnaa behtar hota hai kyuki kuch cheejon ko extra masale ki zarurat nhin hoti.. aur fir is kahaani mei suspension hai, secrets hai, sex hai jo apne aap mei apnaa ek naya andaaz aur naya jaayka rakhte hai...
Lambe updates ke baare mei me itnaa kahunga ki mujhe time lena padega. Mei roj ek update post kar raha hun... Agar us se dugna likhna pade to mujhe 2 din ka waqt chahiye. Aur fir meri kahaani nyi hai, mei bhi yahan naye readers ke beech me apni kahaani lekar aaya hun aur apni yogyta apne readers ke saamne saabit karne ki koshish kar raha hun. Agar meine update me deri ki to readers naaraj ho sakte hai lekin haan itnaa zarur kar sakta hun ki kisi bhi sex scan ko adhura nhin chodunga jaisa ki kayi stories mei hota aaya hai.. sex scene ko beech me chod dena koi suspension nhin hai... Wo ek trika hota writers ka jis se readers jyada se jyada comments karen story ko update dene ke liye... Lekin mujhe lagta readers ko sex chahiye hota to wo forum par nhi balki kisi sex videos site par jaate... Yahaan readers ko sex ke piche ki kahaani chahiye hoti... Sex ka andaaz chahiye hota hai jo unhe aur unki expectations ko satisfy kar sake...
Is liye filhaal mei lambe aur bade updates ke baare me koi promise nhi kar sakta but haan mere har update me chaahe wo bada ya chota kaisaa bhi ho.. usme is kahaani ki ek kadi puri trah se aap sabhi ke saamne darshati jaayegi...
Aap sabhi kaa ek baar fir se comments and suggestions dene ke liye aur meri is kahaani ko aur mujhe ye samman baksh ne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya..
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