18-09-2024, 04:25 AM
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This update solidifies your status as a master storyteller. Truly remarkable work, Krish! You're the KING of authors.
1. In the Update 41, the way the fight started & evolved between Krish and Meera, I felt story again heading towards the same path like last ending. However, Desai played a good role there which he didn't have to yet he chose to convince Meera to have a one-on-one conversation with Krish and to give him a chance to hear him out. It somewhere will later click Krish's mind that it was Desai who made that chance possible for him.
One thing that definitely bugged me about Meera in chapter 41 was where she during heated moments claimed that Desai is nowhere like Krish and he is not cuckold like him and Desai never wishes to share her with other men. While her words might have been fueled by anger, they cast a shadow on her double character.
Her statements kind of implied that she never wanted to be involved with other men and Krish was responsible for making her do it. Meera words portrayed as if it was always a forced upon her and she did it without her consent which is not at all true and somewhat signifies Meera's double face. True, she never initiated any encounter, but when it happened she always embraced and enjoyed the moments with other men & never ran away from it. She infact used to encourage Krish in her own smart witty exciting dialogs, may it be with Desai or any other guy. So blaming solely Krish sounded very weird of Meera and her statements sounded to show that Krish being cuckold is a hateful thing which she never wants from her man. It kind of showed Krish less of a man in front of Desai which is not true. In truth she wanted it when Krish wanted it & always loved it as well. They are a special couple deeply in love who explore their sex life doing all these stuff. May this low mindset society call it anything but they were happy doing it with each other. They are far better than those fake couple who claim to be in love but get separated when things turn even a bit ugly. Story has always shown that Krish and Meera become closer to each other when they explore their sexual boundaries which is a true in real life as well.
2. Chapter 42 is nothing short of breathtaking—a pivotal moment in the story.
How smartly author managed everything is kind of work which we can't expect from any other writer on this platform.
Had Krish revealed the truth about Desai and Nidhi to Meera, it would have led to a disastrous outcome similar to past ending. Meera would instantly hated Desai to a level that she would have thrown him out of her home and everything would have remained same like the last ending. But now possibilities have changed.
However, the author skillfully altered the course by having Desai disclose the truth himself, though Desai manipulated the confession a bit in his favor but who wouldn't do it as a person. It was a good strategy to keep Meera calm.
This revelation is likely to soften Krish’s stance, as Desai’s willingness to expose himself for Meera and Krish’s sake demonstrates his intention to mend their relationship. Krish won't forget this and neither would Meera.
Meera seemed quite calmed down after Desai's revelations, may be she is just content that finally her Krish is back to her which is the only thing matters to her at this point but it’s crucial that she addresses her feelings towards Desai, who still betrayed her trust despite his assurances. How can she simply give Desai a clean slate so easily. We'll get to see that part in future I guess. May be Krish would do it on Desai's behalf to return Desai's favor lol.
With this amazing update, there could be a possibility that Krish and Meera might forgive Desai which they should after a while and Desai after sometime might convince Meera or Krish for Shimoga or any trip together where we can expect something exciting which we have been expecting from start of this story . i.e. to let Krish unobstructed witness Desai's sexual episode with Meera without 'both' of them knowing about him watching. This part was added to last ending in a very bad way which was like a mental trauma to Krish and to us readers as well. Hopefully, it would be exciting in this ending.
As far as I understand agenda is not to make Desai an enemy to make Meera and Krish unite again but to explore how relationships evolve and heal. Things can be done in a better way which author just did.
Desai may have developed feelings for Meera but that doesn't mean he wants to steal her away from Krish which is quite evident from his confession. He knows Meera's loves only Krish and may be he now understands that love means to give freedom and to want your loved one to be happy and he knows Meera's happiness lies with Krish but yes wanting Meera for a little while is what he can always expect which is not wrong at all on his part and this is what Desai did here. Desai knows if a day comes when she has to choose between Desai and Krish, it would be always Krish (if no other twists follow), although Meera might have little feelings for Desai which is actually expected when you spend so pleasurable physical moments with a guy who is monster in bed.
For me this is just not a story anymore. It has already become a saga. I’m grateful to be part of this journey through your work, Krish_999.
Can’t wait for the next update!
1. In the Update 41, the way the fight started & evolved between Krish and Meera, I felt story again heading towards the same path like last ending. However, Desai played a good role there which he didn't have to yet he chose to convince Meera to have a one-on-one conversation with Krish and to give him a chance to hear him out. It somewhere will later click Krish's mind that it was Desai who made that chance possible for him.
One thing that definitely bugged me about Meera in chapter 41 was where she during heated moments claimed that Desai is nowhere like Krish and he is not cuckold like him and Desai never wishes to share her with other men. While her words might have been fueled by anger, they cast a shadow on her double character.
Her statements kind of implied that she never wanted to be involved with other men and Krish was responsible for making her do it. Meera words portrayed as if it was always a forced upon her and she did it without her consent which is not at all true and somewhat signifies Meera's double face. True, she never initiated any encounter, but when it happened she always embraced and enjoyed the moments with other men & never ran away from it. She infact used to encourage Krish in her own smart witty exciting dialogs, may it be with Desai or any other guy. So blaming solely Krish sounded very weird of Meera and her statements sounded to show that Krish being cuckold is a hateful thing which she never wants from her man. It kind of showed Krish less of a man in front of Desai which is not true. In truth she wanted it when Krish wanted it & always loved it as well. They are a special couple deeply in love who explore their sex life doing all these stuff. May this low mindset society call it anything but they were happy doing it with each other. They are far better than those fake couple who claim to be in love but get separated when things turn even a bit ugly. Story has always shown that Krish and Meera become closer to each other when they explore their sexual boundaries which is a true in real life as well.
2. Chapter 42 is nothing short of breathtaking—a pivotal moment in the story.
How smartly author managed everything is kind of work which we can't expect from any other writer on this platform.
Had Krish revealed the truth about Desai and Nidhi to Meera, it would have led to a disastrous outcome similar to past ending. Meera would instantly hated Desai to a level that she would have thrown him out of her home and everything would have remained same like the last ending. But now possibilities have changed.
However, the author skillfully altered the course by having Desai disclose the truth himself, though Desai manipulated the confession a bit in his favor but who wouldn't do it as a person. It was a good strategy to keep Meera calm.
This revelation is likely to soften Krish’s stance, as Desai’s willingness to expose himself for Meera and Krish’s sake demonstrates his intention to mend their relationship. Krish won't forget this and neither would Meera.
Meera seemed quite calmed down after Desai's revelations, may be she is just content that finally her Krish is back to her which is the only thing matters to her at this point but it’s crucial that she addresses her feelings towards Desai, who still betrayed her trust despite his assurances. How can she simply give Desai a clean slate so easily. We'll get to see that part in future I guess. May be Krish would do it on Desai's behalf to return Desai's favor lol.
With this amazing update, there could be a possibility that Krish and Meera might forgive Desai which they should after a while and Desai after sometime might convince Meera or Krish for Shimoga or any trip together where we can expect something exciting which we have been expecting from start of this story . i.e. to let Krish unobstructed witness Desai's sexual episode with Meera without 'both' of them knowing about him watching. This part was added to last ending in a very bad way which was like a mental trauma to Krish and to us readers as well. Hopefully, it would be exciting in this ending.
As far as I understand agenda is not to make Desai an enemy to make Meera and Krish unite again but to explore how relationships evolve and heal. Things can be done in a better way which author just did.
Desai may have developed feelings for Meera but that doesn't mean he wants to steal her away from Krish which is quite evident from his confession. He knows Meera's loves only Krish and may be he now understands that love means to give freedom and to want your loved one to be happy and he knows Meera's happiness lies with Krish but yes wanting Meera for a little while is what he can always expect which is not wrong at all on his part and this is what Desai did here. Desai knows if a day comes when she has to choose between Desai and Krish, it would be always Krish (if no other twists follow), although Meera might have little feelings for Desai which is actually expected when you spend so pleasurable physical moments with a guy who is monster in bed.
For me this is just not a story anymore. It has already become a saga. I’m grateful to be part of this journey through your work, Krish_999.
Can’t wait for the next update!
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