12-09-2024, 10:48 PM
(06-09-2024, 10:39 AM)suryaspk Wrote: Exactly man, I agree with you on above points. I hoped this bet will end in draw and Shipra will accept for one off session with patode in exchange for his cooperation. But now looks like she accepted defeat and want to be dominated. I feel this part is so rushed. Mainly Shipra wanting to be dominated why man... I just hope there will be some twist in there.
Author has set an elaborate premise but events of one night is going on for so long. I just hope author addresses this in future updates.
Wait for the next chapter... Things will be streamlined.
This one night is being stretched because this is the turning point of the story.
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