10-09-2024, 07:52 AM
(This post was last modified: 10-09-2024, 07:55 AM by Hornytamilan23. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
The cheating wife? The question mark is there for to make people guessing, is srinu correct about Ganga? That's why you need CCTV.
The cheating wife! When you replace it with an exclamatory mark, you can move to why, when and how Ganga did this.
You are a smart guy kk007007, you can do both at the same time. Let the story flow in a way that both get some action. Instead of making readers to guess, you keep srinu guessing in the story. Mean while you reveal it to the readers.
Let this be a cat and mouse game between srinu and ganga, but don't make it as a game between you and the readers.
Your story got the most likes, applauds when Ganga gave us some action.
The cheating wife! When you replace it with an exclamatory mark, you can move to why, when and how Ganga did this.
You are a smart guy kk007007, you can do both at the same time. Let the story flow in a way that both get some action. Instead of making readers to guess, you keep srinu guessing in the story. Mean while you reveal it to the readers.
Let this be a cat and mouse game between srinu and ganga, but don't make it as a game between you and the readers.
Your story got the most likes, applauds when Ganga gave us some action.
-Pickup, drop, escape.