06-09-2024, 11:01 PM
Great writing, but why is the frequent start and stop? Actually I thought the story will proceed exploring the relationship between the protagonist and his partners family. Suddenly it is veering towards the family of Geetha, which seems a bit diverting. Like always waiting for the writer to see how he takes it forward.
Bineesh!


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