Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

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1. A story doesn't need to be a romantic drama or "cuckold" narrative to demonstrate that love exists between characters. Neither we need hundreds of words on it to believe if love exists. Love can exist in any kind of story, and actions often reveal it more effectively than words. While we all appreciate love in a story, it’s the emotional impact of those actions that truly makes the narrative compelling and effective.

2. Being wild doesn't change a person's core character. You can be both innocent and wild at the same time, and wildness is a sexual trait that may emerge in certain situations. It’s not appropriate to compare Meera and Shipra, as their stories are different, and Atul is not like Krish. 
I really don't think past is needed to push Shipra towards a free life style. While some background is useful for context, constantly revisiting her past can become monotonous as no one wants to live in past. Unlike past, she is a married woman now and things are difficult for women of character when they're married. She can't just simply start acting like a characterless woman. Viresh was her BF then and it was completely fine to act the way she did in past. Here, Pathode is neither her friend, nor her bf so of course she can't go and spread her legs just because Pathode is wild and making her remember of Viresh. That's why everyone is interested more in Shipra than Namrata as Shipra a mature and strong-willed woman unlike her so called jealous "friend".

The reason why every reader is more interested in getting to see Shipra fucked is because she has been portrayed a woman of character unlike Namrata.  Namrata is completely opposite woman and I'm sure if a different story is written taking Namrata as a central character, only a handful of people would be interested in reading that story.


3. Well it's completely natural for a person to feel tempted, especially wheno when you're in a room where specimen like Pathode is fucking someone. But what's impressive was when Shipra still managed to take control after a mere glance at her Mangalsutra. This self-discipline sets her apart from everyone else. We all know Shipra might be filled with lust and may possess wild tendencies  but what makes her interesting is the control and strong will he possess.


4. I don't think it would have been good idea if anger and conflict with her husband would have made Shipra do what she did. I appreciated that the author avoided this route, as anger often leads to regrettable decisions. We look forward to seeing Shipra make choices when she’s in a more balanced state of mind.


Even I agree, that the plot is both fresh and promising but like I said before, a woman can be both innocent and wild; it’s really about the person who brings out those hidden facets.
While I understand Shipra getting fucked is inevitable and even I'm eager to see how that plays out but all i expect that  occurring under right & logical circumstances, not by cheating and deciet. 
If Shipra had emerged victorious, the plot could have taken an entirely different turn and would have outrun other stories where things are quite predictful. It would have been fascinating to see how events might have unfolded if she had won
However, given the current trajectory, it’s clear what’s likely to happen next—unless there’s a surprising twist."


I genuinely enjoy this story, which is why I’m sharing my thoughts. Everyone is entitled to their own opinions. The author, being the creator of the story, has every right to craft it in their own way, without needing to explain their choices. It’s their prerogative to deliver the narrative as they envision it.

1. Thats not the point. I was saying what happens between Alok and Shipra is no way related to the story. My point in bringing Krish and Meera is because when Krish is cuck its directly relevant about the adventures they plan and what keeps them going is their love for each other..here its internal struggle for Shipra rather than Alok's influence so one sided narrative is enough to carry the story.

2. Once you eat a forbidden fruit you are no longer innocent. She had a wild sexual life prior marriage so how is she innocent? Innocence in physcial relationship is what I am referring to not being innocent human being, do not get confused. Since she had tasted an active and wild lifestyle in bed in the past and she is deprived of that what's wrong in getting tempted to taste it again? Ofcourse to push her towards the past you need a catalyst in the story and here it is Namrata. I do not see this as a weak plot as you do and very well written character arcs.

3. Yes she is self disciplined until now and we do not know if she lost here or not but as of now even if she loses here with Patode, does not mean she is changed or characterless. Every one has weak moments and trusting her friend is Shipra's weak spot. She has always been apprehensive on Namrata's decisions and past reveals that she though confesses everything to her friend she always restrains in following her suggestions. So what changed here compared to her previous stand with Namrata is obviously external dependencies which she is facing now and where she needs Patode. Namrata has used this opportunity well and trying to push her towards achieving both 1. Her suppressed desires 2. Profession hurdles. 
Writing story is arc is not easy ..pushing to the brink for someone to take the jump is an arc which is extremely difficult to write and author successfully wrote all circumstances which pushed Shipra to be at this point where she took the decision and i do not think there is anything rushed here though I agree every one has their own opinion and you expected more which is fine.

4. "Anger often leads to regrettable decisions" Of course Shipra at some point needs to regret this course of action hence adding fight with husband angle would make more sense though its an old plot. If not then what's the point of creating a section where Alok's friend plants bad seed in his mind about his wife? I thought that whole scenario is for establishing a fight between Alok and Shipra and also I think his friend's village has to be one of the village Shipra is going to be working soon where he encounters her so that arc will be interesting to see if he gets a chance to spend time with Shipra.

"i expect that  occurring under right & logical circumstances, not by cheating and deceit. "

This is where I disagree..why does every story needs lead women's arc falling for a man by herself? I think we have tons of stories where a married women falls for some seducer herself and later regrets it but no where a premise where she is pushed into it by her friend through deceit and i felt this is refreshing take but that's just my opinion. I am not criticizing your thought process just posting my thoughts on the story and a healthy discussion bro. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.