Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

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I must say this update was completely disappointing and frustrating one! The worst so far....thumps down !!
I wish I could unread it as my hopes for this story just fell to ground.

CHALLENGE PART:-
I don't understand why author tried to portray Shipra a smart woman in the start of story when the story has always depicted her in a completely contradictory light. She’s come across as quite naïve recently, or I could say 'dumb'.
How on earth could Namrata decide that Shipra didn't win? If this was intended to be a challenge, Shipra could have easily brought a stopwatch with an alarm to signal the end of the time.  Here some readers replies would come that she relied on her friend Namrata which really isn't a good cover.
                                    Is Shipra smart? It’s hard to say now. Or was this whole scenario was just a quick plot to maneuver Shipra into Pathode’s bed? Must say 'bad idea'.
Its really frustrating to see that even when Shipra won, still she's been shown a loser and all this just to make her fuck? Come on dear author.. why in so hurry to make her fuck and that too on a basis of a lie ?
Sounds so turnoff and illogical. 

This update felt tedious and disheartening. All potential excitement seems to have vanished unless something dramatic happens in the next update, where Shipra discovers that Namrata lied about the challenge. Perhaps she overheard Namrata talking to Pathode about the deception when she was near the door. If not, I’m sure the author might address this lying issue later, but it may lose its impact by then.


It feels like author is rushing and forcing himself just to make Shipra fuck Pathode as soon as possible which is such a turn off . This whole plot sounded so illogical. Namrata from start is brought in just to manipulate Shipra and to make her fall into Pathode's trap so that he can fuck her.
She is not a friend to her and Shipra can't even understand her own friend. Namrata somehow magically understood that Shipra enjoyed giving BJ which is weird and now she has magically turned Shipra'' mind to accept the circumstances. This all sounds too easy and is not making sense.


If we look closely nothing much happened in this update. All we got to know was that Namarate lied to Shipra and then Shipra magically turned into woman of cheating mindset  and now she is standing in Namrata's room ready to be fucked by Pathode.  Nothing much happened other than this.
Most of the update was largely consumed by lengthy explanations of Namrata’s thoughts ,as if we're watching some daily soap which started irritating at some point.  I skimmed through much of it because the narrative was overly verbose, stretching what could have been conveyed in a few lines into several paragraphs. After a while, when I realized sentences are just being stretched, I mostly  concentrated on dialogues part which were like 5% of the whole update, otherwise complete update went what either Namrata was thinking or what Shipra was thinking which we already knew from day one but same thing kept repeating again and again.

Additionally, the story initially suggested that Shipra and Alok were a loving couple, but this love has never been convincingly portrayed. Their relationship now feels more like an arranged marriage where the wife can’t even express her feelings to her so called loving husband and is on the brink of infidelity.


I had high hopes for this story, but this update was truly disappointing. It feels like the plot has become predictable and lacks substance.

Dear author, I apologize for the harsh critique, but I wanted to be honest. While some readers might be excited by Shipra’s new direction because all they wanted was to see Shipra magically turn into a slut which is about to happen, I find myself disheartened.

love

Few points and my thought process on the story.

1. This is not a love story nor a cuck story like KMW from Krish, so showing true love between Alok and Shipra is not needed in detail as this is more struggle from a wife to break her shackles and face challenges in her professional life.
2. Just as the pretext has been established with KMW that Meera is adventurous right from beginning , Pretext here has been established that Shipra has been wild in her past life so her being seduced from beginning as innocent wife would not sit well and in contrast the plot should be more towards reminding her past self or pushing her towards that free style life she had before marriage.
3. Who better than trusted friend to push her and remind her past life. Maybe its jealous of Namrata or her being influenced by Patode she is manipulating her friend. If you have seen before, Namrata and Shipra fought over this before many times in the past but things are different now in this trip because she knew she herself got tempted looking at both Namrata and Patode in bed.
4. One thing I would probably agree here is if Shipra had committed to this after fight with Alok would have made more sense, I mean real fight when Alok accuses her of cheating as she did not pick phone. Instead this is happening right when Alok is trying to reach out to her. Also Shipra committing for her career advancement wouldn't sit well with her character, maybe omitting that would be better as Shipra succumbing to her old self would be more real reason that for meager promotion.
5. As for the plot I think its really good and one that has never been tried before, not every women needs to start as innocent and loving pativratha who gets seduced to a point where she gives in to the pleasure, this path is beaten to death already in many stories and this episode is perfect for this plot and necessary as the emotions and thoughts that both Namrata and Shipra goes through their mind is important to establish to enlighten the path towards the decision Shipra made.

Lastly lets see if Shipra completely gives in or if there is a twist here again. This is a brilliant story telling in my opinion and masterful writing on erotic sequences better than many authors who write best plot but fail to write actual erotic graphical scenes well.