[Harry Jordan]

Hey Krish , 

  Absolutely loved the new modified approach to the ending chapters of this story. Now it feels more organic and engaging. But I would love to add an idea to the story which I believe can benefit the overall stuff. Krish is basically obsessed with wanting to see Meera and Desai intimate but he never got the chance. I strongly believe he should atleast get to fullfill his wish and get to watch them having sex but without their knowledge. And I believe the perfect idea to execute that was done in your last chapter when Desai sparked an interest in going outdoors with Meera and Krish. I believe that angle can help Krish finally fullfill his desire to see them in their act while at the same time make it oblivious to them that Krish is watching with the correct scenario. I believe letting that happen will help with closure to Krish's fetish and also explore the dynamic of the duality in Krish , like a part of him gets excited watching him having sex but at the same time another part dreads the sight. This will help with closing the idea and duality of Krish by having his wish fullfilled but also get to make him realize what he actually wants. Or maybe seeing the act makes him bring some necessary changes in him that eventually makes him let go off his cuckolding kinks. Because we all know Desai is a different kind of a lover for Meera , he has definitely impressed her in bed. So I believe Krish seeing them would eventually make him realize the right and wrong and that gradually builds the sanity in him. This is just a small opinion from me , though I am confident that your final product will be better. Take your time and end this story better than before!

Lots of Love!