24-06-2019, 08:12 AM
(24-06-2019, 02:01 AM)IndiYogi Wrote: She is Marathi. What angle u want to add
I just wanted to say you should add about her character more, about her education, her family, may be past filres , there are some perceptions regarding how marathi women act that you can add.
Your story is already very good, i thought this would make it even spicy.