Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
(26-08-2024, 02:12 AM)critic_honest Wrote: Absolutely loved it! Dear author, your display of skill is phenomenal. What an amazingly written episode!

Well planned tact crafted by Pathode to put up that kind of challenge expecting Shipra would eventually lose and would become his plaything for the rest of her posting but aren't most of us readers already predicting this outcome, given no girl has ever made Pathode climax that soon as he claims. But but but, just imagine for a moment, what fun and twist would it be if it's Shipra who wins this challenge against all odds and over confident Pathode loses to her.
                                         What if Shipra using her experience displays such an hidden extra ordinary talent that it impresses Pathode so much that he finds himself overwhelmed and reaches his peak & cums within the time limit? Such an experience could drive Pathode to become even more captivated and obsessed with Shipra, wondering who this remarkable woman is who could bring him to such an intense climax so quickly, especially when she wasn’t fully invested in him. Her impact might haunt his thoughts and disrupt his sleep with an insatiable desire to understand and experience more of what she has to offer. He might lose the bet but hey, he would get a chance to cum by Shipra or maybe on Shipra lol.

I remember Pathode, driven by overconfidence, made bold claims that he wouldn’t even resort to crude language if he lost.
However, while his crude remarks and flirtatious behavior often unsettle Shipra, but there’s a part of her that responds to it. What if Pathode, recognizing this dynamic, requests & offers to go above and beyond to assist Shipra with everything she needs, just to keep up his flirtatiousness as Shipra is so confident of her so she doesn't have to worry. We know Shipra wants his help primarily for the NGO issue at the moment and accepting this extra help could be beneficial in her favor.
     

Imagine how challenging would it become for Pathode to win and bed Shipra after this, which eventually would make the story more exciting because the harder it is for Pathode to seduce Shipra, the more captivating the story becomes.
Fingers are literally crossed to see what happens next. If Shipra ends up losing, the outcome is predictable, potentially diminishing the element of surprise. So let's see how it goes.

Just a thought dear author: I've noticed that the interactions & conversation between Pathode and Shipra are often more compelling & enticing when they’re alone, without Namrata’s presence. For example, their encounter at the bank was particularly intense and engaging. It was quite arousing. Hoping there would be some scenarios in future where they both are alone & Pathode would talk to Shipra alone.

It seems to me that a one-on-one scenario could be even more thrilling than a threesome, as Pathode would be fully focused on Shipra. Of course, that's just my personal opinion.

I'm simply enjoying how this story is unfolding as author is taking the route of logics and realism which adds more depth and authenticity unlike other stories here. Love to see that happening.
This is what makes it erotica !!

Can't wait for next update.......

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Thanks a lot man, will keep your suggestions in mind. Cheers  yourock
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RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by BANK - 10-06-2024, 02:16 PM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 26-06-2024, 01:22 AM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 06-07-2024, 07:48 PM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 06-07-2024, 07:45 PM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 13-08-2024, 09:48 AM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 22-08-2024, 12:00 AM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 21-08-2024, 11:55 PM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by Suraj76626 - 27-08-2024, 11:43 PM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 06-09-2024, 02:52 AM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 06-09-2024, 05:42 AM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 06-09-2024, 08:15 PM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 22-09-2024, 05:18 AM
RE: The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal. - by RCF - 26-09-2024, 10:38 PM



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