27-08-2024, 11:26 AM
(This post was last modified: 27-08-2024, 11:28 AM by maharsha25. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Dear Author, Your story has been captivating and engaging. It is fresh, creative and well narrated. I may have overdone my criticism about this chapter, as I wanted things to happen in my way so desperately. What I forgot to understand is that the story is yours and it will be fascinating to see the next turn of events. After all you have created such a potentially legendary plot that no one could ever think of. I think it's time for me and everyone else to stop giving suggestions to you. It's time for you to showcase your perverted sexually twisted kinky thoughts with us without any inhibitions or feedbacks. Time to fucking go and continue writing a masterpiece in making ! Good luck and many thanks ! I still think a "man" can't write a story with such depth and class and a tad bit of sophistication.