25-08-2024, 12:08 AM
(21-08-2024, 08:47 AM)khemucha Wrote: The scenes need to be crisper otherwise the excitement, the eroticism is lost ... often things are prolonged and repeated ... the kissing scene was a glaring example ... but the story plot is moving along nicely ... and the sex scenes are hot ... both the imagined one and the real ... but before it ends, we need to find out whether after knocking out her husband they dragged her into the second floor room in the middle of the night to play ludo or snakes & ladders ... that is the burning question ...
(24-08-2024, 06:07 PM)tomdickharry2024 Wrote: KK bro.. thanks for the update.. but we need more!!! Dont leave us hanging like this...
Tom tell it to this guy .. he wanted a crisp update.