21-08-2024, 11:39 PM
(21-08-2024, 11:08 PM)maharsha25 Wrote: Dude these are exactly my thoughts and sentiments. I wish there was a detailed description of hard-core fuck between the three of them and a good amount of seduction that leads to a fucking session just like it was in chapter 8 and 9. That said the author seems to be prolonging and stretching the sexual ordeal and there are a lot of unnesscesary conversations that could have been avoided and also the fact that this is chapter 16, a full fledged fukcing session should already have emerged. For me, the story has now gone a different trajectory. However if it works for you and everyone else then that is great. Shipra should not fuck patode just because she does not have a choice. Namrata should have seduced shipra to fuck patode leading to a threesome., not just by words but by stripping her and both dancing and stripping for patode. Even a small element of compulsion in the plot has made it somewhat cliche. Anyway, the entire larger part of the story is well narrated amd I appreciate the author for bringing this forth to us.
-Pickup, drop, escape.