[maharsha25]

Protagonist getting fucked is inevitable, after all this is an erotic forum.

Keeping that in mind, author has a core plot in his mind. But how he writes it, making the screenplay that is enjoyable and as well as erotic, is what makes the author the best in the buisness.

Slow and steady development that leads to hardcore sex will drain the balls of the readers.

Making Shipra to strip, then touching the dick, handjob, blowjob. Then she do fingering thinking about big black cock, the Shaft with nerves, bull like hung balls. Next time when she sees him, she will get wet. 

First encounter will be half hearted. Second time it will be mutual yet she will have guilt. Then it will be a passionate one. Atlast she will call him for a hard fuck.

When she thinks the ordeal is over, she would eventually will get passed on. She will get submissive, then a wanton whore. 

The ordeal never ends, which will make her forget the reality. No stopping from there on.

How interestingly the author uses this template, is upto him. Till now I can see the author listens to the readers, and put his efforts to satisfy them.

So no queries.I would like the readers to encourage the author to come up with frequent updates. 

I can understand that the author tries to be logical, and shipras actions are justifiable. And that's what I asked for. But I too feel, some editing has to be done to the last chapter. 

There are few, who are concerned about the continuity, but that's the highlight of the shuraj. He will connect. 

Dude these are exactly my thoughts and sentiments. I wish there was a detailed description of hard-core fuck between the three of them and a good amount of seduction that leads to a fucking session just like it was in chapter 8 and 9. That said the author seems to be prolonging and stretching the sexual ordeal and there are a lot of unnesscesary conversations that could have been avoided and also the fact that this is chapter 16, a full fledged fukcing session should already have emerged. For me, the story has now gone a different trajectory. However if it works for you and everyone else then that is great. Shipra should not fuck patode just because she does not have a choice. Namrata should have seduced shipra to fuck patode leading to a threesome., not just by words but by stripping her and both dancing and stripping for patode. Even a small element of compulsion in the plot has made it somewhat cliche. Anyway, the entire larger part of the story is well narrated amd I appreciate the author for bringing this forth to us.