21-08-2024, 04:50 PM
(15-08-2024, 07:58 AM)andhratochennai Wrote: nice update..
but it feels nice to read, if sukanya feels shy and emrassed everytime she meets sarath reembering the fact that he had seen her nude and she tries to cvover her body from him again......
sarath story would have taken in different way giving him ways to seduce sukanya slowly and it would have been more nice if sukanya doesnt want to have sex with him but fall in that by situation over time...
I didnt like the line that sukanya taking the move in water to place his hand on her boob..
now it is not so exciting when sarath touching her...
please bring someshyness in sukanya..
Thank you so much for this story...
but i am disappointed for vimals death and his very bad rowdy behaviour in the last..
I understand bro. There is a back story before this development occurred. Will add the story when I get time.