[Armani007]

None taken brother, everyone is entitled to their opinion. But as I have already mentioned the story is not about meaningless fuck fest, it's about Shipra's ordeals.

I tried to make the narration as close to reality as possible and in my view this chapter is one of the most important one in this story line. 

And why would Shipra be aroused????? She is not intoxicated like before, she has been stressed by work and Patode's behaviour and above all she just had a fight with Alok. Why in her right mind she will be aroused? 

As far as connecting the previous chapter is concerned please be patience dear reader, the encounter has not ended yet. And if you have read the chapter more closely you'll find Alok texted Shipra first before calling which is directly linked in the last para of part 2.

The character of Shipra is not of a horny dumb wife who jumps on a bigger cock as soon as she sees one. Her struggles and efforts are portrayed in this chapter. 

And at last I don't think you really grasped the essence of this chapter and was expecting just a blown out threesome. Sorry to disappoint you, I hope you'll like the next chapter. 

Thanks for taking time to put out your views. Really appreciate it.

U can include some self talk of Patode or whoever sets his eyes on our heroine. It will help the readers know the exact line of thoughts of Patode and others. It's my suggestion. It can make the encounters more spicy. I think men like talking to themselves when the see a maal bhabhi in front of them like Shipra.