Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[Suraj76626]

No offense bro but the plot went haywire, lacking erotic elements in this chapter. The conversation went on and on and never transitioned into a sex sequence quite when it required. Shipra doesn't look aroused rather the whole aspect of compulsions seems a bit overused in other numerous sex stories. In your chapters 8 and 9, Shipra was playfully seduced and a willing participant since she was purely sexually aroused, yet did not have any other motives to engage in a threesome. Somehow, it seems you can't seem to connect from where you left out in the chapter 15, the part where alok was calling and Shipras phone was buried under the saree and sweaty bodies were fukcing each other under a beam of moonlight. Some ending parts of a chapter triggers such a suspense and excitement among the readers, while the subsequent chapters don't match the same level of sensation as compared to the end part of the preceding chapter. In a sense , the plot lacks proper flow in narration between chapters. What should have been a legendary sexual narration ended up being a meaningless futile conversation of cat and mouse game between parode and the other two. It could have been simpler but the prolonged conversations really blew the air when all that was required was descriptions of a threesome sex.

None taken brother, everyone is entitled to their opinion. But as I have already mentioned the story is not about meaningless fuck fest, it's about Shipra's ordeals.

I tried to make the narration as close to reality as possible and in my view this chapter is one of the most important one in this story line. 

And why would Shipra be aroused????? She is not intoxicated like before, she has been stressed by work and Patode's behaviour and above all she just had a fight with Alok. Why in her right mind she will be aroused? 

As far as connecting the previous chapter is concerned please be patience dear reader, the encounter has not ended yet. And if you have read the chapter more closely you'll find Alok texted Shipra first before calling which is directly linked in the last para of part 2.

The character of Shipra is not of a horny dumb wife who jumps on a bigger cock as soon as she sees one. Her struggles and efforts are portrayed in this chapter. 

And at last I don't think you really grasped the essence of this chapter and was expecting just a blown out threesome. Sorry to disappoint you, I hope you'll like the next chapter. 

Thanks for taking time to put out your views. Really appreciate it.