21-08-2024, 02:28 PM
(21-08-2024, 08:47 AM)khemucha Wrote: The scenes need to be crisper otherwise the excitement, the eroticism is lost ... often things are prolonged and repeated ... the kissing scene was a glaring example ... but the story plot is moving along nicely ... and the sex scenes are hot ... both the imagined one and the real ... but before it ends, we need to find out whether after knocking out her husband they dragged her into the second floor room in the middle of the night to play ludo or snakes & ladders ... that is the burning question ...
Very well said.Humorous yet true.
But I feel the writer wants to leave us with that suspense. Like some things are better left unsaid, and the reader is free to imagine the way it pleases his own psyche. We see such sorts of endings in some classic movies too. And it drives debate much better than if he completes it.
The YIN and YANG was actually a play on us readers,since there are readers who yearn to both sides.
Ppl who are on the side of YIN get the moral justification and happy ending without losing out on the erotic imagination of the husband.
Ppl on the YANG side would feel that his imagination was spot on reality especially aided by some other facts in the story (Ganga changing her seat after interval, her silence on what happened that night, and the sudden death of the villains in the end)