Adultery The Cheating Wife ?

[intrepid]

Hi Kk…,

Your writing is creative and the depiction of a man’s internal fight against his own insecurities about his wife’s fidelity is unique….such plots have been written before (about a man’s insecurities); however, none that I have read were in the Yin and Yang format.

Your command over English makes this story even for enjoyable.

Please don’t fall for the demands from certain readers for “sex scenes” as the appeal of your story is the suspense and the theme is about a man’s fight against his doubts and insecurities, not mere sex!!!!! The internet is full of different themes of “sex stories” so certain readers who don’t find sex in your story can go visit other stories…..your story has a unique theme, please stick with the theme.

I’m hoping (and so are so many of your readers) that at some point in the story, you DO tell us readers via Srinu or via Ganga’s own narration what TRULY happened between Ganga, Javed and Chacha when they had kidnapped her into the under construction building as Srinu lay unconscious. Keep up the good work. Thanks.

Intrepid