18-08-2024, 02:44 PM
(25-07-2024, 11:55 PM)adams_masala Wrote: Anyone reading this may I know if you were caught off gaurd by switching to the sex scene between Sunita and Jegan without mentioning their names? Did you all notice that? What went through your mind? As an author I'd love to hear what went thorough your mind until you read the whole thing to reveal it was Sunita and Jegan.
Yeah, bit confused when I read it. But later connected the dots and proceeded further. I feel, too many characters can confuse or derail the wonderful story. May be you can change the plot or add a new twist. Again, you are the author, you know best what to write. I like the story. Waiting for frequent updates.