[maharsha25]

Great update.

This small incident of  forceful act by Pathode turned more amusing when Shipra controlled herself at correct time. What made it more realistic and exciting was the response of Shipra. The slap was a powerful and well-deserved reaction from her, I would say. Shipra's body started betraying her but still she held herself and didn't lose control which showed her struggle, but also her character and strong mind. Loved that moment—it was definitely the highlight of the update.

You did an excellent job at explaining Shipra's mind turmoil & emotions. I only wish, there had been a bit more content to read since most of the update captured emotions of Shipra. It could have been lengthier for more impact.

My apologies for the typo in my previous comment, where I mistakenly referred to 'Alok' as 'Atul.' That was an oversight and doesn’t reflect my engagement with the story. I found the over-the-top reactions of some readers amusing clp); , but rest assured, I’m genuinely invested in the narrative. 
Mistakes happen!


Just a note for the future:
Some readers are desperately looking forward for fuck session between Pathode and Shipra as if it's some porno movie. I would request to you dear author to refrain from it ang go with your own realistic pace. 
The path to fuck session is long way ahead as it won't sound meaningful at, if it happens at this stage. The plot has just started to unfold and and building story’s foundation is crucial.
Hoping, you too are looking forward to make this story an epic which can happen only if, things happen when they are supposed to.
JOURNEY is always more exciting than the Final Destination.



Also, looking forward to see the bitterness to down down between Shipra and "Alok" in upcoming update as we wouldn't expect Shipra to take decisions based on agitation & wrong state of mind just because things were not good between her and "Alok". 
Let Love prosper between them..


Expecting next update soon...

Love

A sensual ecstacy of whole night of raw carnal fucking would be a more appropriate term as compared to a porno flick. Everyone's preferences differ and there is no pressure to narrate the story in a specific manner no matter how enforcing the responses are. Whatever you said is spot on as I wish to see the lengthy descriptions of foreplay and sexual positions especially a threesome. Namrata influence is making Shipra act on something that she could have restrained herself. Shipra is ready to discover her slutty promiscuous side that was hidden after her marriage to her cuckold husband alok. Someone said it was not right to include two teenagers in the plot but they were part of the plot as a third person perspective to induce the aspect of voyeurism, which is equally hot and arousing.