Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[critic_honest]

Great update.

This small incident of  forceful act by Pathode turned more amusing when Shipra controlled herself at correct time. What made it more realistic and exciting was the response of Shipra. The slap was a powerful and well-deserved reaction from her, I would say. Shipra's body started betraying her but still she held herself and didn't lose control which showed her struggle, but also her character and strong mind. Loved that moment—it was definitely the highlight of the update.

You did an excellent job at explaining Shipra's mind turmoil & emotions. I only wish, there had been a bit more content to read since most of the update captured emotions of Shipra. It could have been lengthier for more impact.

My apologies for the typo in my previous comment, where I mistakenly referred to 'Alok' as 'Atul.' That was an oversight and doesn’t reflect my engagement with the story. I found the over-the-top reactions of some readers amusing , but rest assured, I’m genuinely invested in the narrative. 
Mistakes happen!


Just a note for the future:
Some readers are desperately looking forward for fuck session between Pathode and Shipra as if it's some porno movie. I would request to you dear author to refrain from it ang go with your own realistic pace. 
The path to fuck session is long way ahead as it won't sound meaningful at, if it happens at this stage. The plot has just started to unfold and and building story’s foundation is crucial.
Hoping, you too are looking forward to make this story an epic which can happen only if, things happen when they are supposed to.
JOURNEY is always more exciting than the Final Destination.



Also, looking forward to see the bitterness to down down between Shipra and "Alok" in upcoming update as we wouldn't expect Shipra to take decisions based on agitation & wrong state of mind just because things were not good between her and "Alok". 
Let Love prosper between them..


Expecting next update soon...

Love