[Suraj76626]

I'm a fan of Aurelius and Shiprat (read old man and indian wife). whatever you said is spot on but let the writer decide and let him give some space everyone and not to intrude snd infiltrate his train of thoughts. I think I can safely say this writer is better than Aurelius in his narration because the build up in chapter 8 and 9 and other ones before that was nothing short of unique and extraordinary. Namrata stripping and encouraging Shipra to strip and helping her strip was extremely hot and provocative. I ejaculated on the 9 chapter. So I don't have much complaints but a detailed narration of sex needs to happen after a horny description of naked sweaty bodies fukcing each other in the silver beam of moonlight at the end of 15 chapter.

I won't go so far as comparing myself with authors like aurelius and Shiprat. It is only my first story and it's quite difficult to keep the momentum going, linking each and every chapter without making a blunder. Thanks for the appreciation man. Will try to give a cock raising update soon.