13-08-2024, 01:09 PM
(13-08-2024, 04:39 AM)Ghost999 Wrote: Hahahahahaha
Lagta hai aapne meri baat ko dil se laga liya mene sirf aapke comments ko pdh ke reply nhi diya mene sabhi comments ko pdhe the suru se end tak tb jaake mene comments kiye or yeh comments me kabse karne me tha but time nhi mila or finally mene comments kiya or aapne lagta hai meri profile pe jaake sb already research kar chuke ho ki mera yeh first comments hai haa aapne shi khaa yeh mera first comment hai kyuki main har kisi story me comment nhi karta kyuki vo sb story same si hoti hai jise me read nhi karta lekin jise read karta hu toh usme agr mujhe kuch baat alg lagti hai toh main thoughts jrue share karta hu.
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Haa aapne shi khaa ki har ek aurat ki sex ki khawish hoti hai jisko vo khul. Ke byaan bhi nhi kar sakti or mene story suru se read kri hai or preet me koi kami nhi hai kami shubh me hai or shubh ne usi galti or kami ko accept karke preet ko raaji kiya kisi or ke sath sex karne ke liye aap yeh baat bhi dhyan me rakhe. Rhi baat baccha na de paane ki usi ke liye usne yeh kadam uthaya or kisi male ke liye yeh utni he bdi baat hoti hai ki vo baap nhi ban sakta jitni ek aurat ka maa naa bnna. Lekin hum yhaa ek he side leke story ko read nhi kar rhe hai dono side ke pahlu ko read kar rahe hai ki situation kya chal rhi haI. Jismani sukh dene ki baat pe shubh or preet ka last sex read kriye jhaa pe preet ko ek alag satisfaction mila tha or yeh tbhi milta hai jb dono ek dusre ke emotions ko deeply smjh sake or rahul ek sex worker hai jiska kaam he sex karna hai toh vo obviously shubh se accha he hoga kyuki age Clint ko khush nhi kar payega toh uski job pe asar pe pad sakta hai iske liye vo trend hai already or yhaa story me main love ko bhi mention kar rha hu kyuki log LOVE word use karke apni sari LUST fantasy ko puri kar lete hai or jb baat shadi ki aaye yaa galti se pragnet ho jaaye toh chod ke bhaag jaate hai jo ki meri najar me Bilkul galat hai kyuki aap ek LOVE jese pavitra word ko apni LUST puri karne ke liye kisi dusre ki feeling or emotions ke saath khilwaad karte ho toh vo mujhe pasand nhi or yhaa pe rahul ne usi se shuruaat ki hai baaki aage ka pata nhi..
Or aapne khaa ki ek aurat ki life jismani sukh ke bina adhuri rhati hai but aap yeh bhi mt bhuliye jismani bhuk ke sath usko maa banne sukh bhi hai jo ki preet ko pana hai kyuki maa banne ke sukh ke liye he toh vo dono yeh sb kar rhe hai nhi toh sex toh vo kar he rahe the.
Aapne chaprasi wali baat khi jo ki mujhe smjh me aa gyi ki aapne shubh, rahul or preet teeno ko isme shamil kr diya but aap yeh bhi toh sochiye jiss singhaasan ko chaprasi ne barso tak sambhaal ke rakha uska dhyan rakha uski garima ko bnaye rakhne ke liye vo sb kiya jo shayd vo na kar pata but phir bhi usne kiya or kal ko koi dusra aake usko bol de ki chl haatt yeh mera singhaasan hai toh us time us chaprasi pe kya biti hogi yeh baat bhi toh dhyan me rkhna chahiye
Baki aapko mere comments se thoda sa bhi santy sa feel hua toh uske liye main maafi chahunga aapse.
Aapne is story ko apne najariye se read kiya or mene apne
Aapko jo accha lga aapne likha or mujhe jo accha lga mene
Sahi kaha apne sir...
Aapka nazariya aur meri samajh alag alag ho sakti hai..
Magar preet ko insaaf tab milegi jab wo maa ban payegi..
Maa banne ke liye ek sahi mard ka intikhaab hona zaruri hai..
Aur waisa mard banna shubham ki kismat me nahi hai..
Shubham ki badkismati ka bojh itne dino tak preet utha rahi thi..
Ab preet ki kismat me rahul ki entry hui hai..
Isme rahul ki kya galti hai..?
Bas itna sa ki wo doner hote huye preet ko dil se chahne laga hai..?
Aag dono taraf lagi hui hai.. preet ke dil me bhi... Aur rahul ke dil me bhi...
Rahul ke pass khone ko kuch bhi nahi hai.. magar paane ko to bahot kuch hai...
Shubham ke pass khone ke liye preet jaisi innocent wife ka pyaar aur shadishuda life hai..
Bas preet hi aisi hai jo aisi duwidha me rahegi.. ki usko apni raah chunna mushkil hogi..
Wo ek aisi doraahe par khadi hai ki uski zindagi ki ek taraf shubham jaisa pyaar karne waala pati hai...
Aur dusri taraf rahul jaisa shakshiyat jo uski andhkar bhari zindagi me ek roshni lekar aaya hai.. jo use pyaar bhi de raha hai aur jishmani sukh bhi..
Ab preet hi faisla kar sakti hai ki kon si raah wo chune
Baaqi to shubham aur rahul ki ateet hi batayega ki kon asali hero hai aur kon villain... Ya phir dono hi hero ho sakta hai.. jaisa ki aapne kaha ki koi teesra dabang type ka villain ka bhi carecter aage chal ke saamne aaye... Isme mai ek baat aur jodna chahti hu.. wo teesra carecter shubham aur rahul ke hi ateet ka koi aisa dushman ho jo rahul ki girl friend se juda hua ho aur uska is khel me ahem kirdar ho lekin villain ka