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Adultery Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka
(12-08-2024, 08:42 PM)Naaz Wrote: Aapke jazbaat ko salaam karne ko dil karta hai sir..
Mujhe lagta hai ki aap isi story me first comment kiye ho clps
Mujhe lagta hai meri comment me shubu ko villain banane ki baat se aapko bura laga hai..
Aap apne jazbaat ko rok nahi paye aur register hokar comment karne aaye ho.. aapka tahe dil se shukriya jo meri hi tarah is story se aap bhi connect hai..
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Baat ye hai ki ek aurat hona asaan nahi hota 
Ek aurat hi samajh sakti hai jab uski jishm ki pyaas bhadakti hai tab wo khud ko kaise har gunah se bachane ke liye khud ki khwahisho ko kaise qurban karti hai
Is qurbani ko takleef ko shubham jaisa mard nahi samajh sakta
Agar samjha hota to wo preet ki khwahisho ko qurban hone se pahle apni kamzori aur kami ko samajh ka khud hi beech se hat jaata.. agar aap kahani ko shuru se padha hota to ye jaan lete ki preet me koi kami ma hone ke bawazood bui shubham ki maa usko kosti aur banjh kaheti aur jaleel karti rahi... Preet ko jitna sahena the wo usse jyada hi sahene ki koshish ki.. kya shubham preet ke sath ye nainsafi nahi kiya? ki khud ki kamzori ko chupa kar preet par sab tohamte lagne diya aur apni maa se ek shabd bhi mahi kaha... Khair preet ki zindagi shubham ki wajah se pura andhkar me chali gayi thi... Kya isme shubham ki galti nahi thi?
Shubham ko pata tha ki wo na to preet ki khokh bhar sakta hai aur na hi jishmani shukh de sakta hai... Phir bhi pyaar karne ki zarrat honi chahiye tha kya usko?
Ek aurat ko zindagi jishmani sukh ke bina adhuri hoti hai kya ye shubham ko nahi pata hai?
Zara ek baat to bataye... Ki agar ek chaprasi ko singhasan mil jaye to kya wo us singhasan se pyaar nahi karega... Magar ye sachai chaprasi bhi janta hai ki wo us singhasan ke qabil nahi hai .. agar wo chaprasi imandar hota to wo singhasan uske hawale kar deta jo us ka sahi se haq ada kar paye aur uske qabil ho...
Is baat ko samajhne ki koshish karoge to shubham ki aur rahul ki tulna asaani se kar payenge 
Thank you



Hahahahahaha 

Lagta hai aapne meri baat ko dil se laga liya mene sirf aapke comments ko pdh ke reply nhi diya mene sabhi comments ko pdhe the suru se end tak tb jaake mene comments kiye or yeh comments me kabse karne me tha but time nhi mila or finally mene comments kiya or aapne lagta hai meri profile pe jaake sb already research kar chuke ho ki mera yeh first comments hai haa aapne shi khaa yeh mera first comment hai kyuki main har kisi story me comment nhi karta kyuki vo sb story same si hoti hai jise me read nhi karta lekin jise read karta hu toh usme agr mujhe kuch baat alg lagti hai toh main thoughts jrue share karta hu. 

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Haa aapne shi khaa ki har ek aurat ki sex ki khawish hoti hai jisko vo khul. Ke byaan bhi nhi kar sakti or mene story suru se read kri hai or preet me koi kami nhi hai kami shubh me hai or shubh ne usi galti or kami ko accept karke preet ko raaji kiya kisi or ke sath sex karne ke liye aap yeh baat bhi dhyan me rakhe. Rhi baat baccha na de paane ki usi ke liye usne yeh kadam uthaya or kisi male ke liye yeh utni he bdi baat hoti hai ki vo baap nhi ban sakta jitni ek aurat ka maa naa bnna. Lekin hum yhaa ek he side leke story ko read nhi kar rhe hai dono side ke pahlu ko read kar rahe hai ki situation kya chal rhi haI. Jismani sukh dene ki baat pe shubh or preet ka last sex read kriye jhaa pe preet ko ek alag satisfaction mila tha or yeh tbhi milta hai jb dono ek dusre ke emotions ko deeply smjh sake or rahul ek sex worker hai jiska kaam he sex karna hai toh vo obviously shubh se accha he hoga kyuki age Clint ko khush nhi kar payega toh uski job pe asar pe pad sakta hai iske liye vo trend hai already or yhaa story me main love ko bhi mention kar rha hu kyuki log LOVE word use karke apni sari LUST fantasy ko puri kar lete hai or jb baat shadi ki aaye yaa galti se pragnet ho jaaye toh chod ke bhaag jaate hai jo ki meri najar me Bilkul galat hai kyuki aap ek LOVE jese pavitra word ko apni LUST puri karne ke liye kisi dusre ki feeling or emotions ke saath khilwaad karte ho toh vo mujhe pasand nhi or yhaa pe rahul ne usi se shuruaat ki hai baaki aage ka pata nhi.. 

Or aapne khaa ki ek aurat ki life jismani sukh ke bina adhuri rhati hai but aap yeh bhi mt bhuliye jismani bhuk ke sath usko maa banne sukh bhi hai jo ki preet ko pana hai kyuki maa banne ke sukh ke liye he toh vo dono yeh sb kar rhe hai nhi toh sex toh vo kar he rahe the. 

Aapne chaprasi wali baat khi jo ki mujhe smjh me aa gyi ki aapne shubh, rahul or preet teeno ko isme shamil kr diya but aap yeh bhi toh sochiye jiss singhaasan ko chaprasi ne barso tak sambhaal ke rakha uska dhyan rakha uski garima ko bnaye rakhne ke liye vo sb kiya jo shayd vo na kar pata but phir bhi usne kiya or kal ko koi dusra aake usko bol de ki chl haatt yeh mera singhaasan hai toh us time us chaprasi pe kya biti hogi yeh baat bhi toh dhyan me rkhna chahiye

Baki aapko mere comments se thoda sa bhi santy sa feel hua toh uske liye main maafi chahunga aapse. 
Aapne is story ko apne najariye se read kiya or mene apne 
Aapko jo accha lga aapne likha or mujhe jo accha lga mene 


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RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by Pvzro - 08-06-2024, 09:06 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by Saim097 - 09-06-2024, 11:26 AM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by sri7869 - 09-06-2024, 01:30 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 05-07-2024, 09:47 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by Pvzro - 03-07-2024, 11:17 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 04-07-2024, 11:08 AM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 05-07-2024, 01:10 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 05-07-2024, 02:17 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 04-07-2024, 10:22 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 05-07-2024, 01:15 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by sa9891 - 05-07-2024, 02:07 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 05-07-2024, 03:57 PM
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RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 05-07-2024, 07:29 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by Pvzro - 05-07-2024, 06:06 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 05-07-2024, 07:51 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by Pvzro - 05-07-2024, 08:30 PM
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RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 06-07-2024, 04:00 PM
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RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by Naaz - 27-08-2024, 11:52 PM
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RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by mukhtar - 05-09-2024, 10:45 PM
RE: Biwi meri, par Bacha kisi aur ka - by joy2008 - 08-09-2024, 03:35 PM
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