13-08-2024, 03:23 AM
(This post was last modified: 13-08-2024, 03:27 AM by Ghost999. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
(12-08-2024, 08:50 AM)HumiliatingStories Wrote: Thànks brother ...itna sab detail me comment krne k liye and stry ko itna deeply samjhne k liye ...bahut kam hi users hote hai jo itni detail me story ko samjh paate hai ....Thank you bro.
jaisa tumne bataya ....woh sab sahi hai ....preet aur shubu bahut pyaar krte the ek dusre se ...but ek kami hamesha se thi ek ache sex ki ....jo usse rahul se mil raha hai toh aise me uska behekna bhi laazmi hai .....aur yes aage story me bilkul ye malum chalega ki aisa kyaa hua shubu aur rahul k bich me ki woh iss tarha se revenge lene pe aa gya hai ...aage story me khulega ye sab bhi ...its a long story ...and kaafi jiyada kinky bhi hoga woh part story ka ...kaafi kuch hai abhi story me jo hona baaki hai ,..
thanks so much for appreciation and itna pyaar dene k liye ..and sabse request hain iss story ko 5 star ratings de ...aur bahut upar tak pahuchaye
Mene bas apne mun ki baat khi hai is story ko leker kyuki wakayi me yeh bhut acchi story hai or iska base piller bhut strong hai jo ki mujhe bhut accha laga...
Kyuki story ka maja tbhi aata hai jb readers ko yeh bilkul pta na chal paaye ki aage kya hone wala h kyuki ek writer ki yhi pehchan hoti hai ki vo apna next move aisa likhe jisse readers ko bhi sochne me majboor kar de ki yeh twist bhi ho sakta hai...
Baki aapko ek suggestion dena chahunga ki aap future me story ke andr un kirdaaro ko wapis la sakte hai jo shubh or rahul ke college ke time unke sath the jisse yeh story or bhi depth jaayegi jisme shubh or rahul ke college ke vo incident un kirdaaro ko wapis se jinda karke unhi ke jubani se readers ko btaya jaa sake or isi ke sath ek twist yeh bhi ho sakta hai ki rahul or shubh toh 2 kirdaar hai he lekin ek teesra character bhi ho jo shubh or rahul ki dushmani ki wajh ban sakta hai or vo character itna powerful ho ki in future shubh or rahul dono ko he use haraane ke liye dono ko milke uska samna karna pade jisme shubh or rahul ko yeh realise ho ki jo vo log abtk karte aa rhe the vo sb isi ka plan thaa...
Filhaal toh mere yhi suggestions hai baki aapne kya soch rkha hai vo hum aage read krenge